BYC Poetry Club!

[ChickenLover200]

welcome! i wish i was that good!

As the chicken slips away

Chickens seem to always get sick
Then their time comes when they have to leave
their earth home for some place better
When we don't want to let her
she still goes as the young does cry
she slowly dies
she slowly slips away from your humanly hold
just as she is told by the one who made her above
who was sent down like a dove.

It's kinda corny i think let me know if ya like it :/

 

[ederob]

welcome! i wish i was that good!

As the chicken slips away

Chickens seem to always get sick
Then their time comes when they have to leave
their earth home for some place better
When we don't want to let her
she still goes as the young does cry
she slowly dies
she slowly slips away from your humanly hold
just as she is told by the one who made her above
who was sent down like a dove.

It's kinda corny i think let me know if ya like it :/

Great poem, it is sad though! You are better then I am!

 

[Beaky Buzzard]

welcome! i wish i was that good!

As the chicken slips away

Chickens seem to always get sick
Then their time comes when they have to leave
their earth home for some place better
When we don't want to let her
she still goes as the young does cry
she slowly dies
she slowly slips away from your humanly hold
just as she is told by the one who made her above
who was sent down like a dove.

It's kinda corny i think let me know if ya like it :/

nice

 

[Beaky Buzzard]

Sleepwalking

Wake up wake up your drifting away
Sleep walking through life everyday
No time to live no time to see
Just drifting away away from me.

Old times are past and gone
Feel so low feel all alone
It's like your just blind
walking through the pages of time.

 

[ChickenLover200]

Thanks!

 

[Mr MKK FARMS]

Don't have anything today either...

 

[Ducclelover10]

Sleepwalking

Wake up wake up your drifting away
Sleep walking through life everyday
No time to live no time to see
Just drifting away away from me.

Old times are past and gone
Feel so low feel all alone
It's like your just blind
walking through the pages of time.

That's a really good one!

 

[Ducclelover10]

welcome! i wish i was that good!

As the chicken slips away

Chickens seem to always get sick
Then their time comes when they have to leave
their earth home for some place better
When we don't want to let her
she still goes as the young does cry
she slowly dies
she slowly slips away from your humanly hold
just as she is told by the one who made her above
who was sent down like a dove.

It's kinda corny i think let me know if ya like it :/

That's a really good poem too!

 

[Mr MKK FARMS]

Don't have anything today either...

Noveling is more up my alley.

 

[Ducclelover10]

Noveling is more up my alley.

Yeah.