BYC Poetry Club!

[BantamFan4Life]

The night covers me,
I listen to it song.
I listen to the mocking bird,
Mocking us all.
I listen as the wind whispers,
In a tongue I shall never understand.
I watch as the firefly dance,
Their lights shining into the night.
I look into the sky,
At the million of stars.
How I love the summer night,
How I love my country home.
The call of the coyote fill the night,
The crickets join them.
Oh, the cool summer night breeze,
That plays with my hair.
oh, how I dread the sun that comes,
Chasing the stars and moons away.
Hushing the midnight songs,
Of the night creatures.


Okay, got bored and just typed it up.

Nice.

 

[miss heny]

Truthfully 0.o? I honestly don't think it is as good as the other poets on here

 

[chickenoverlord]

The night covers me,
I listen to it song.
I listen to the mocking bird,
Mocking us all.
I listen as the wind whispers,
In a tongue I shall never understand.
I watch as the firefly dance,
Their lights shining into the night.
I look into the sky,
At the million of stars.
How I love the summer night,
How I love my country home.
The call of the coyote fill the night,
The crickets join them.
Oh, the cool summer night breeze,
That plays with my hair.
oh, how I dread the sun that comes,
Chasing the stars and moons away.
Hushing the midnight songs,
Of the night creatures.


Okay, got bored and just typed it up.

that's REALLY good! See, I told you you were good enough to quit lurking!

 

[BantamFan4Life]

Truthfully 0.o? I honestly don't think it is as good as the other poets on here

You used the sense of Imagery very well.

 

[miss heny]

You used the sense of Imagery very well.

I don't under stand the meaning

 

[miss heny]

that's REALLY good! See, I told you you were good enough to quit lurking!

Make me

You do know I just typed that up? Letting me mind run lose? And it doesn't even rhyme? 0.o

 

[BantamFan4Life]

Imagery: Using the uses of: sight, smell, taste, hearing, and touch to create a mental image.

 

[miss heny]

Imagery: Using the uses of: sight, smell, taste, hearing, and touch to create a mental image.

oh.. well, thank you.

 

[BantamFan4Life]

np

 

[chickenoverlord]

Make me You do know I just typed that up? Letting me mind run lose? And it doesn't even rhyme? 0.o

poems don't have to rhyme, just like all art is not abstract. Poetry should be expressive, like painting and scuplting, because it is a form of art. And that was some good art!