fixing up my RP

[OrpieLover31]

You are a African plains animal,looking to find a herd so you can migrate for the rainy season.Beware of predators and poachers alike,as predators will take an easy target,while a poacher wants an animal in its prime.

You are an African lion,in one of the packs,following the migration in search of prey,while also keeping a look out for poachers.

You are a hyena,scarred and bitter over the loss of the war to lions,you seek revenge...

Or will you choose a cheetah?Fastest of all land mammals,but are you fast enough?

Or perhaps another,simply looking to survive the Savannah?

Was that good?too long?I want your input

That sounds perfect!

 

[OrpieLover31]

Also the rules:

1.All BYC rules apply
2.This is Bush Chickens and OrpieLover31' s RP,so whatever we say,goes
3.no magical powers
4.no "Mary sue' s"
5.keep it at a max. of PG-13,but keep the details on "love" down
6.no cursing,not even this: h***
7.you can't kill someone's character without their permission
8.no playing God
9.have fun

Did I forget anything? Oh,and the history of the RP will be explained next to the map once we have one

Looks good to me!

 

[Bush Chickens]

Yay!!! now we just need a map...

 

[Bush Chickens]

How's this? I really

want your input! . Red=burned Dark Mane Pack territory blue=White Claws Pack territory. Green= Light Fang Pack territory. Orange=hyena territory. Nice? Okay,here's the short intro story that goes above the map: The lions and the hyenas waged a brutal war,the alpha female of the White Claws slain,the hyenas thought they had won,the outlook was grim,The Dark Pack territory caught ablaze,decimating the land.But in the heat of a great battle,Tarlok,leader of the White Claws,ambushed their leader,slaying him.And thus the war ended,the hyenas defeated.The animals of the plains ,little involved in war,knew almost nothing of this,unknowing of the building tension,between hyenas and packs alike,prepare to migrate,while yet more poachers enter the Savannah.

 

[Bush Chickens]

Here's Tarlok

,he's going to be one of my characters

 

[OrpieLover31]

How's this? I really want your input!

. Red=burned Dark Mane Pack territory blue=White Claws Pack territory. Green= Light Fang Pack territory. Orange=hyena territory. Nice? Okay,here's the short intro story that goes above the map: The lions and the hyenas waged a brutal war,the alpha female of the White Claws slain,the hyenas thought they had won,the outlook was grim,The Dark Pack territory caught ablaze,decimating the land.But in the heat of a great battle,Tarlok,leader of the White Claws,ambushed their leader,slaying him.And thus the war ended,the hyenas defeated.The animals of the plains ,little involved in war,knew almost nothing of this,unknowing of the building tension,between hyenas and packs alike,prepare to migrate,while yet more poachers enter the Savannah.

Looks good to me!

 

[OrpieLover31]

Here's Tarlok,he's going to be one of my characters

Cool! I will go look for a character to start off with!!

 

[OrpieLover31]

This is going to be Willow (I named her after one of my chicks )

 

[OrpieLover31]

And this one! Her name will be Mia!

 

[Bush Chickens]

This is going to be Willow (I named her after one of my chicks )

aww,good name should I make the RP page now?you ready for this? XD