(e.o btw Kim isn't very popular, not many people at all would know her name.)
Kim began to think about her scratch to much, though it stung slightly it shouldn't throw off her aim, but she was getting nervous that a sudden involuntary jerk would make her hit a classmate. She soon ran out of arrows in her first quiver and shrugged it off only to be replaced by another. She then began to pick off a few of the monsters in a large cluster that were starting to descend on her classmates. Her hands were now shaking with horror, she had never seen so much blood, but when ever she pulled the arrow back, she found a some degree of self control and managed to keep herself from shaking as she shot. She heard a snuffle down the stair case slightly below her and jerked in surprise. the Monster she had stabbed at earlier was still alive, and completely furious.
Kim began to think about her scratch to much, though it stung slightly it shouldn't throw off her aim, but she was getting nervous that a sudden involuntary jerk would make her hit a classmate. She soon ran out of arrows in her first quiver and shrugged it off only to be replaced by another. She then began to pick off a few of the monsters in a large cluster that were starting to descend on her classmates. Her hands were now shaking with horror, she had never seen so much blood, but when ever she pulled the arrow back, she found a some degree of self control and managed to keep herself from shaking as she shot. She heard a snuffle down the stair case slightly below her and jerked in surprise. the Monster she had stabbed at earlier was still alive, and completely furious.