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Hi, this is a little hard to understand, so it would be great if you could fit it into the form I provided in post #1. Other than that, I think your good!
i got it right this time.
Name:tallulah
Gender: Female
Age: 4 yr
Pack: none, was going to make one
Rank: none
Mate: used to but he died.
Personality: Perso: this mother is daring, protective and cunning. Never get in the way of her and her pup or you'll pay for it. She is a loyal female to her friends and, family and would never betray them. However, she is ruthless to betrayers and enemies. She is also understanding and motherly and would take in motherless pups if she found them.
Physical description: white except for two black front laws and black tipped ears, slender build, tall and gracefull. Has three large long bear claw shaped stars and a burn scar across her right eye. Forward set ears, crystal clear blue eyes, a pinkish cream nose, and white nails. She is also missing one back left toe, and half her tail
Other: Bio: tallulah and her mate were both wolves that left their territory to find
their own way. She met her mate on their travels and eventually found a territory to call their own. After they settled down she got pregnant. However, they were on the land of humans, whom neither ofthe them had ever encountered before, and soon found themselves being hunted by the farmers who wanted to protect their stock. On the run, they were going across a train bridge to get away, but they could hear the train coming from the other side and quickly turned around to run, but were cornered by the humans, so... They jumped. She landed in water, but her mate hit hard on a rock under the water. He sadly died on impact. She wanted toto mourn but it wasn't safe to do so, soand she left him there and just ran as far as she could and hid. Now she was completely lost and not sure what to do, so theI next day, she decided to try and at least find a new den, wich she did find. She gave birth to a pair of pups in that den and they lived there for about 2 months. She was out hunting when a bear found her den. She rushed back to save her pups but the bear had already found and killed one. She managed to save kally after the bear bit off her tail and sslashed her shoulder. She took that pup and ran again since the bear was intent on taking her den and she couldn't fend it off herself. She opted for the next best option, wich was to leave. Andow she is on the move again with a small pup.
Name: kally
Gender: female
Age: 2 months.
Pack: none
Rank: loner
Mate: none
Personality: kally is a spirited playful pup who has a nack for getting into trouble. She loves exploring and tracking things she finds. She is already proving that she has an excellent sense of smell and is a natural hunter
Description: golden cream ful with brown eyes, two black front paws, and two black ears. And like herit mother, she has a tall graceful build.
Other: her bio is in her mom's. She was born in a different den, and had a brother, but lost him to a bear. Now she is on the move with her mother.
Name: king
Gender: male
Age: 4 months
Pack: mountain
Rank: pup
Mate: none
Personality: king is a calm relaxed young pup who loves to play hide and seek. He isreally a friendly pup who doesn't like being alone a lot.
Looks: silver/grey with a black stripe along his back, stalky build, kinda short to. Green eyes with lighter silver/grey colored ears.
Othwr: he was born and raised in mountain pack. His mother and father were both middle ranked wolves, his mother being a slightly higher rank. His father died during an accident about a month ago, and his mother died giving birth to him, so he was raised by the different mothers that were available.
Do they fit more in this rp?
