that would be better directed to someone teaching in Sunday school... or even having been a church goer.... Last time I was in sunday school was 1960. I was five years old and it was a Nazarine preschool... In Roswell New Mexico.If u had to rate my children’s book from 1-5 what would it be.
What I remember of the bible does involve these "stories" Parables? directing life meaning and values.
What I do know about writing in general is If you have a particular audience you write as if you were there using their words yet not talking down to them.
bring an analogy around to show that the sand is soft and not sturdy.... and the rock is solid and strong....
Then compare it to the teachings of Jesus. and why in both cases they weather the storm in a similar manner.
These concepts are difficult to convey to a very young group... But to older say nine or ten there is some foundation for understanding ...
Remember my background is Very secular and diverse and soooo not religious. I do know and understand religion as a good thing. Its just not my thing.
So rating is not my forte... Rating implies comparison...
deb