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[Buff Hooligans]

Hi Victoria and fellow readers! I read the first three parts yesterday afternoon and was so entertained and amused. I loved it. Will print Part 4 and read it today. Thank you Victoria for your story!

 

[Coopa Cabana]

Can't believe my vision of the name "Cauliflower" was true - just a little mix up with the species and gender!!! LOL Great reading Victoria - we're ready for Chapter 5 anytime. Thoroughly enjoying this!!!!!!

 

[VictoriaTwead]

Buff, I'm so pleased you're enjoying it!

Coopa: Wasn't that spooky that you thought of a cauliflower? Of all the veggies in the world, you thought of cauliflower! (X-Files music playing)

Heehee- but you still haven't guessed what happens to poor Cocky.

Victoria

 

[Sjisty]

Sticky end, as in porcupine pie?

 

[VictoriaTwead]

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Lol! We don't have porcupines in Spain.

Victoria

 

[Coopa Cabana]

At first, I thought maybe he got stuck in some of Mother's kiwi & porridge face pack and it hardened on him! But then he was rehomed to Cauliflower, who, by the way, is a friend of Mother's. And just what kind of 'herbs' is she buying from him? I still think we will be seeing more of Mother - something tells me she will be involved right up to the end.

PS - There are no porcupines in Spain?

 

[VictoriaTwead]

Coopa - You are a smart, smart lady! As my English teacher used to say, 'She reads with understanding.'

PS No porcupines in Spain as far as I know. Hedgehogs, maybe.

Victoria

 

[VictoriaTwead]

Just to apologise for not posting up Part 5 of Cocky's story today. Been down the mountain shopping and now run out of time.

Will do it tomorrow for anyone interested.

Victoria

 

[wegotchickens]

That would be ME

(even though I'm not really sure I want to know).

 

[VictoriaTwead]

I'm so sorry. The end is nigh for poor little Cocky...

Victoria