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[GoldenSparrow]

This is very good, I have been writing somthing similar about the life of a battery hen.
it is a good way to spread the word about them.

 

[luvinmychickens]

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Thank you! You inspired me to write this story. I hope you stay to read more!

 

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Oh, and my state made a little change!!!

 

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Chapter 7 - Part 1

It lightened, but just dimly. There was a bunch of others in this wire cage with me.
'Where's my Mommy and Daddy?' I cried.
'What's that?' One replied.
'Yeah! What's that?' Another said.
'It's one who gives birth to you. It's your Mommy and Daddy! My Mommy and Daddy are so beautiful!' I replied sadly.
'How do you know what they look like?' They both said, together.
'I just saw them! I was under my Mommy. She was keeping me warm. Then Grain played with me too! Then... the-'
'Who is Grain? That's an odd title! Who would like to be named that?' The first one interupted, being snotty.
'Grain is my friend! Then... Then... She disapeared.' I looked down to the ground.
'What was it? A DREAM?' The snotty one said.
'I.. Uh.. I guess so.' I replied.
'Haha! You dream, about such stupid things. Like that'll ever happen.' The snotty one rolled her eyes.
'Hey! You don't have to be mean about it. I'm sure you dream!'
'Obviously, I don't! I can't believe you have the guts to say that to me! Dreams are for babies. And I, Marietta, does not dream. Baby, baby, baby!'
'Your name is Marietta? Nice.'
'Why, thank you. Some day I'll be Miss. Queen Marietta! Just what I have always dreamed of. I mean. . . What I have always wanted.'
'You dream!'
'Uh, as a matter of fact, I don't! Er, what's your title?'
'My title is Clu-. I mean, my title is Maizie.'
'Ohh, nice title.'
Grouchy butted in. 'It's called a name, not a title.' She was acctually calm.
'Oh, what do you know!' Marietta snapped.
'Be nice to Grou-. I mean, be nice to Miss. Genius.'
'And where did she get Miss. from?' Marietta argued.
'It's her name. Miss. Genius. I bet you don't even know what genius means.'
'Eh, yes I do!' Marietta yelled.
'Do tell.' I said anxiously.
'Er.. Eh.. Um.. Uh.. It means, to uh.. Oh I give up!' She trotted away to the corner of the wire cage and pouted.
'Thanks for sticking up for me, Clumsy. I mean, Maizie.' Grouchy aka Miss. Genius commented to Clumsy.
'It's okay. I'll call you Miss. Genius, if you call me Maizie. How's that?'
'Good! I like that name. Where did you get these ideas?'
'Well.. I got Maizie, from a dream. And I got Miss. Genius by your personality.'
'Good thinking...'
'Why, thank you.'
'So, Maizie, I guess we're friends, right?'
'Of course! We have been since the start! We'll be together forever.'

 

[Theeggboxtoo]

Thank you! Great chapter!

 

[luvinmychickens]

Aww.. Thank you!

 

[yankeedoodle300]

Nice Chapter! The best Yet! I Love it! Gotta go, Star wars Is on, and i'm a Star wars Freak!

 

[luvinmychickens]

Thanks!

 

[GoldenSparrow]

luvinmychickens Wrote:

Thank you! You inspired me to write this story. I hope you stay to read more!

Oh gosh thanks, I didnt even realize its you, with your new avatar!
I will definitely be reading more!

edited for spelling​

 

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Oh gosh thanks, I didnt even realize its you, with your new avatar!
I will definatly be reading more!

Thank you!

I'm about to post a chapter right now.