just made a website can you tell me how it looks

[sunny & the 5 egg layers]

Very nice website. I fixed a couple spelling/grammer errors for you.

Welcome To Storybrooke Rabbitry
Here in the little town of Prineville, Oregon I raise and sale (should be "sell") French Lops, English Lops, and soon German/French Angoras and looking to maybe geting ("geting" should be spelled "getting") some New Zealands and maybe Flemish Giants. Here I try to breed top quality French Lops but ("I am")still working on it. I have a doe and a buck English Lop but have not had any kit's ("kit's" shouldn't have a ' but should be spelled, kits) yet but hopefully will some time in the spring. I have been breeding rabbit's (no ' in rabbits) for one year now and have had one successful litter of French Lops (a period should go here) I ended up keeping three of the kit's (no ' in kits) they are in my breeding program now and fit in very well. I have 7 French Lops 2 English Lops and 2 Angoras and love all of them. I love to raise rabbits they are so fun to be with every day. I (not sure why there is an I in there.)

Blossom is a very nice girl she she (There should only be one she)weigh's around 14.00. she has a big head and has a nice body type.​

 

[WhiteMountainsRanch]

I also wouldn't put my phone number. If you do want to keep it, you need to fix the capitals on that "Contact Page".

 

[Glenmar]

Pretty rabbits.

 

[goofy98]

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thanks

 

[roocrazy]

I...Like it! PLAIN AND SIMPLE!! none of the optical illusion background things

 

[goofy98]

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thank

 

[punk-a-doodle]

Looking good, and has all the essentials. One thing I would mention is what you are most working to breed for. For me, I am interested in temperament and health when I am looking for anything, from a rat to a dog. Other people are most interested in things like awards for showing, conformation specifics (actual ear size-usually in inches-for the English lops), any side projects (for English lops, some breed for therapy work, which goes back to temperament), rare colors/markings, etc.

 

[goofy98]

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I know I am trying to think of new ways to make it better. and yes I do need to mention that I do try to breed for all of that

thanks for the advice

 

[goofy98]

I just made new updates chek it out

 

[ambrosia]

Very sweet... and nice pictures! Other than the errors in grammar and a perhaps less than direct approach, I enjoyed visiting the site. And
look forward to seeing it evolve