just made a website can you tell me how it looks

[goofy98]

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can you tell me where the errors are?

 

[WhiteMountainsRanch]

Home Page:

had one successful litter of French Lops I ended up

Needs a period after Lops.

three of the kits they are in my breeding

Needs a Comma after kits.

raise rabbits they are so

Needs the word "because" after rabbits.



On the "My Angoras" page the First letter in the sentences needs to be capitalized.



I still think you should put a small paragraph at the top of each page with a little info about the breed.​

 

[Debbiesflocks]

I would say it's much better than what i could do. I love the fact that it was nice and quite, no Music. I always back right of of sites i go to that have music.

If i remember right you were wanting pigs a while back, hows that going? Got that pig pen built yet.

 

[goofy98]

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Needs a period after Lops.

three of the kits they are in my breeding

Needs a Comma after kits.

raise rabbits they are so

Needs the word "because" after rabbits.



On the "My Angoras" page the First letter in the sentences needs to be capitalized.



I still think you should put a small paragraph at the top of each page with a little info about the breed.​

thanks I will fix that

 

[goofy98]

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I no dont you hate that when people put music on there websites. I still dont have the pig pen built yet but I am on a holding list to get 5 hampshires

and if you win grand champian or reserve grand champian in the fiar you get a free pig

 

[goofy98]

o and what do you think I should name my angora doe?