My chicken story. :)

[equinehugger3]

Cute! I've been wanting to write a fictional story about my chickens for a while, but it never works out... Usually I try to write a Barbara-ish one, or one like Bird and the Fluffybutts; realistic fiction, but really funny... I'm going to subscribe to find out what happens to Pip! He better be careful!

 

[The Turken Lady]

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"I have an idea!" Thalia called out over the roar of the monsters. "I'll fly up to one of the trees on the other side and then look out for monsters!" "When it's all clear,I'll tell you guys,and you scurry across." "That'll never work!!!" Jack scolded. Pip rolled his eyes. "Have any better ideas?" Mini raised her hand. "It's settled then," Pip said,ignoring Mini completely. "We'll stick with Thalia's idea." Thalia nodded her head and then with a grin on her face,got ready to jump for it. "Jeronimo!!" She screamed as she flew across the flat rock and closed in on a tree,then she landed gracefully. She stood proud as the moon light glimmered through her feathers. "Told ya so!!" She yelled at Jack. "Thalia.." Pip yelled through clenched teeth."The plan.." "Oh yeah!" She replied and looked out into the distance."No monsters!" Crooked beak and Brodda ran for it,followed by Jack,Pip and Mini. Soon,almost everyone was across. Pip almost reached the end of the rock,when he heard a warning call coming from Thalia's tree."MONSTER!!" She squealed. Mini stood scared in the middle of the rock. The monster's lights directly on her. It was closing in...

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I've added new pictures of Mini and Thalia for everyone to see!!

I also might have Spelled Jeronimo wrong.

 

[The Turken Lady]

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Ha ha,cute. Thanks

 

[The Turken Lady]

Yay Chicks! :

I'm subscribing to this thread so that I can read further chapters. How fun! Thank you for sharing your writing talent.

Thank you!

 

[The Turken Lady]

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Aww..Thanks.

 

[chickens rule123]

awesome story

 

[The Turken Lady]

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Thanks!

Working on more while I'm sick..

 

[The Turken Lady]

After this story,I'm making another one.

 

[boykin2010]

he should meet a bird on the way there. how about a crazy pigeon? That would make the story really funny. the pigeon should be really stupid and crazy. The pigeon can act like he can take them to the kingdom of the crystal skull but then he gets them lost..... just a thought. by the way i really like the story so far

 

[kcsunshine]

Really cute and well written. I'm subscribing too.