MY ( draft ) Story of Eko The chicken.

[yankeedoodle300]

This is more of a Story/poem mix than a story. I hope you like the Prologue

Prologue

The egg. One of my worst enemy's so far in my life.
I Just can't get out of this prison of a thing.
I tried and tried, but i can't hurt this white oval.
Clink, Clink,
At last! a small crack! " Cheep Cheep Cheep "
I squeal, for i have victory in this endless battle.
I hear my Siblings, Cheeping with victory also.
My life has just begun, but I know that this
is the first of many battles i must overcome in
my life...



So do you like it?
A lot of people are writing stories, so i thought I'd give it a shot.

... Yankee ...

 

[yankeedoodle300]

Part 1 Names


" its okay, its okay " My mother cooed to other chicks around me.
I was Out, Freedom Finally! then suddenly i heard a new voice say
" Whats your name, New kid? "
I heard my sibling say.
" I don't know. whats yours? "
" My name is Punker, like a punk. "
The little chick said.
" hmmmm, i don't know what My name is... "
i said thoughtfully. " what kinda stuff do you like to do, Bro? "
" I am a girl. and i Love to talk. I love to talk!"
I said twice. " Ok, " said Punker, " How about Echo, not like E-C-H-O, but E-K-O."
" Nice " I told him.'

Eko. i Repeated in my head.

Well, Now i had a Name, but,
a name is just a name...
No more than that

 

[yankeedoodle300]

Part 2. The Box


I Want to Go,
I was free of my egg,
but not of this cage,
or brooder, as some call it.

Punker was by my side, when a Hand,
Came down and picked me up
and put me down,
with lots of other chicks.
I called for Punker, but he did not answer.

My stomach Churned as I thought,
What if Punker did Not get put in the same box?

We where put in a Dark Place,
Where Hundreds of other Chicks got put.

Then the earth Was shaken,
Or was it even the earth?

Was it a Box of doom,

Or a new life awaiting?


Please Comment

 

[BlueLagoonRabbitry]

So far what Im getting from it is the baby hatched and its in the hatchery?

 

[luvinmybirds]

Not sure where you're going with this, but continue to let us see what is going to happen.................................

 

[yankeedoodle300]

Okay.

Part 3

The Opening



I Looked up, when a face was looking down,
I looks like the face of the hand.

He singles ME out,
and picks me up.

I am about 25 weeks old now,
And Punker has long passed my thoughts.

He puts me in with Larger chickens,
and the others follow after.
I am Comforted by the presence of other hens.

I feel Like I'm at home now.

And i sure hope it last.


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BlueLagoonRabbitry, you are right about the story line so far.

And this is a write as i go book, so please don't try to tie in the past with the future.... to much

 

[yankeedoodle300]

I Dont know where i am going, either

 

[OwlLover]

 

[yankeedoodle300]

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Do you like it, PolishSilkies45?

 

[OwlLover]

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Do you like it, PolishSilkies45?

Of course! Its really interesting.