My new page

[GloriaH]

Please check it out. Let me know what you think and if you see any spelling errors.

http://gloriahem.googlepages.com/cherryvalleyfarm

 

[okiechick57]

Nice page........only 3 misspelled words Apploosa/app A loosa and inprint/ i M print, and avalibility/availability
otherwise.....very nice and easy to read....love the background

 

[dutchman]

Very nice GloriaH. Enjoyed the pics. Dutchman.

 

[jeaucamom]

First paragraph, We imprint all of out (should be our)..... Otherwise, very nice page.

 

[CarriBrown]

"Day Old SWEDISH Duckling", not Sweedish.

 

[tiffanyh]

...and temperment ...

very sharp though!

 

[65browneyes]

Only other one I see is first paragraph, last sentence, "We belive ......." beliEve.

Nice page! Thanks for sharing.

 

[horsewishr]

Quote:
ALMOST, tiffany. It's TemperAment

My inner English major will now come out:

In paragraph #1:
feeding out animals should be feeding our animals
forefront is one word, not two
resistance-free should be hyphenated
inprint out animals should be imprint our animals
belive should be beliEve
I'd put a comma after companions

In pragraph #2
along with our layers should be in addition to our layers

In paragraph #5
Poustry Book Store should be Poultry Book Store
It's is should be It is

Don't feel bad, Gloria. It's virtually impossible to proofread your own work. Your brain will read what you meant to type--regardless of what your fingers actually banged out.

And the page is BEAUTIFUL. I'll trade you editing for design help any day!

 

[GloriaH]

I have been fooling with this all morning. Now I can't get it to show pictures. Look again and tell me what you think. Thanks for all your help. Has anyone ever used google pages before and can you give me some hints. HELP!

 

[horsewishr]

hmm. the picutures did disappear.

When I edit documents, I always save the new version under an alternate file name. that way if I goof something up, I still have the old version to revert to.