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That doesn't sound snippy and hateful at all to me. But I've talked to them on the phone before so maybe that's why I am reading this differently. You know the tone of voice makes a huge difference in how this message would be perceived.
When I talked to them they have been so super nice and forthcoming and friendly that I took that message to be an inventive and 'trying to be humorous' way of telling her her options.
That's so true, Karin! One problem with reading something is that it's not the same as speaking to someone and hearing his or her voice. With a voice, you could tell if a message was being delivered with humor or sarcasm. We so often hear of people who get upset after receiving an email that didn't come across the way that the author had intended.
Suzy
I think it was the attempt at humor that ruined the letter. People in customer service should realize that a little bit of humor while you are giving someone bad news can come off sounding condescending. It is very unprofessional and you run the risk of people reading it in a way that you did not intend. It's almost like they are saying, "Sorry, some people are getting theirs. You're not. LOL. Maybe later. Don't blame us! Blame the guy that ordered 14 because he's getting his. LOL." Businesses should realize that disappointing people requires an apology and a resolution (like a definite future ship date, a discount or assurances that the customer would be first on the list next year) and not a note that seems to take the matter lightly. The letter explained the problem, but it does leave the reader wondering if they take it lightly. I have nothing against MPC. I have heard a lot of nice things about them, but they may want to re-evaluate the wording on their customer letters.
A much better way would have been to say something like:
Dear Customer,
We deeply regret that we will be unable to ship your order. Due to an unforseen shortage of the breeds you chose, we have been forced to but those breeds on back order. Other breeds are available if you would like to substitute. Due to the inconvenience this may cause you we are willing to offer a small discount in the amount of $XX. If you would still like to have your original order, we will probably be able to ship the chicks in April. Our supplier feels that they should be available at that time.
Please contact customer service at 800-XXX-XXXX so that we may cancel or process the order as you desire. We are very sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused you.
Sincerely,
MPC
That doesn't sound snippy and hateful at all to me. But I've talked to them on the phone before so maybe that's why I am reading this differently. You know the tone of voice makes a huge difference in how this message would be perceived.
When I talked to them they have been so super nice and forthcoming and friendly that I took that message to be an inventive and 'trying to be humorous' way of telling her her options.
That's so true, Karin! One problem with reading something is that it's not the same as speaking to someone and hearing his or her voice. With a voice, you could tell if a message was being delivered with humor or sarcasm. We so often hear of people who get upset after receiving an email that didn't come across the way that the author had intended.
Suzy
I think it was the attempt at humor that ruined the letter. People in customer service should realize that a little bit of humor while you are giving someone bad news can come off sounding condescending. It is very unprofessional and you run the risk of people reading it in a way that you did not intend. It's almost like they are saying, "Sorry, some people are getting theirs. You're not. LOL. Maybe later. Don't blame us! Blame the guy that ordered 14 because he's getting his. LOL." Businesses should realize that disappointing people requires an apology and a resolution (like a definite future ship date, a discount or assurances that the customer would be first on the list next year) and not a note that seems to take the matter lightly. The letter explained the problem, but it does leave the reader wondering if they take it lightly. I have nothing against MPC. I have heard a lot of nice things about them, but they may want to re-evaluate the wording on their customer letters.
A much better way would have been to say something like:
Dear Customer,
We deeply regret that we will be unable to ship your order. Due to an unforseen shortage of the breeds you chose, we have been forced to but those breeds on back order. Other breeds are available if you would like to substitute. Due to the inconvenience this may cause you we are willing to offer a small discount in the amount of $XX. If you would still like to have your original order, we will probably be able to ship the chicks in April. Our supplier feels that they should be available at that time.
Please contact customer service at 800-XXX-XXXX so that we may cancel or process the order as you desire. We are very sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused you.
Sincerely,
MPC