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[gmendoza]

luvinmychickens,

I have 2 books published.Would you accept some constructive critique?? It helped me alot when someone critiqued my works.

 

[luvinmychickens]

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Sure. Just say it to me in PM.

 

[Symphony]

More!

 

[Symphony]

Are you going to write more?

 

[luvinmychickens]

Later.

 

[luvinmychickens]

Anyone home???

 

[gmendoza]

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I am

 

[luvinmychickens]

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I am

Who wants more? I have about a half an hour!

 

[Amigo]

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I am

Who wants more? I have about a half an hour!

Ok.

 

[luvinmychickens]

Ok, I am going to write mor, but it will be from my iPod, so I can't promise you perfect grammar...