Hi all
Just wanted to share my story with you! The one that doesn't have a name yet...Any comments welcome and appreciated!
This is the first part of Chapter One:
Flight sniffed the ground, her accurate sense of smell picking up the slightest trace of hare, in the thick undergrowth in front of her. Silently she moved forwards, dropping into the hunter's crouch, as she neared the thicket. She sprang, and caught the hare in her jaws, killing it swiftly with a bite from her strong jaws. As she padded away, the temptation to eat was nearly too much for her to bear, although she knew the alpha must be fed first. She dropped the hare for a moment, pausing to lick her grey-brown fur, before clasping her jaws tightly over it and leaped away to join the pack.
Back with the pack, Flight dropped her hare on the pile of prey already caught, her mouth salivating with hunger. The other pack members were already eating when she returned. The alpha must have already eaten, she thought, picking up the hare she had just caught.
Cloudsky, the the white furred alpha male, and Rain his mate, the brown dappled furred alpha female, were talking to each other at the back, away from the rest of the pack.
Flight walked over to Dapple, a she-wolf licking her golden fur. Dapple looked up at Flight. "The prey is feeding well," she commented, glancing at the plump form swinging in Flight's jaws. Flight grunted her agreement, and placed the rabbit on the snow in front of her. "Rain is expecting cubs soon," Dapple spoke again, "Most likely tomorrow. It will be good for our pack to have more members. Cloudsky will lead us through yet. "
Flight noticed she didn't mention the other rival packs though, which was why the pack needed more members. She had hinted though, but it was better not to mention it, she thought, tearing into her catch. Speaking of the other rivals would only increase the tension in the pack, and that was the last thing they needed. Lately the pack had been weak, due to relentless attacks from Ice-eye's pack. He had been trying to gain territory, but had failed, although his attacks had weakened their pack.
A black male wolf called Midnight, shouldered his way past the other wolves until he faced Flight. He had overheard the conversation. "Cloudsky cannot lead this pack," he growled, "He is a weak alpha. I should be the one leading!"
"Cloudsky will never give in," Flight growled in return, "He is a strong leader, and he is too proud to admit defeat." When Midnight didn't reply, she continued. "He is a good leader too though. You must see that side of him as well. You should be loyal to him!"
Well, that's all for the moment, I haven't finshed Chapter One yet. Hope you enjoyed!
Just wanted to share my story with you! The one that doesn't have a name yet...Any comments welcome and appreciated!
This is the first part of Chapter One:
Flight sniffed the ground, her accurate sense of smell picking up the slightest trace of hare, in the thick undergrowth in front of her. Silently she moved forwards, dropping into the hunter's crouch, as she neared the thicket. She sprang, and caught the hare in her jaws, killing it swiftly with a bite from her strong jaws. As she padded away, the temptation to eat was nearly too much for her to bear, although she knew the alpha must be fed first. She dropped the hare for a moment, pausing to lick her grey-brown fur, before clasping her jaws tightly over it and leaped away to join the pack.
Back with the pack, Flight dropped her hare on the pile of prey already caught, her mouth salivating with hunger. The other pack members were already eating when she returned. The alpha must have already eaten, she thought, picking up the hare she had just caught.
Cloudsky, the the white furred alpha male, and Rain his mate, the brown dappled furred alpha female, were talking to each other at the back, away from the rest of the pack.
Flight walked over to Dapple, a she-wolf licking her golden fur. Dapple looked up at Flight. "The prey is feeding well," she commented, glancing at the plump form swinging in Flight's jaws. Flight grunted her agreement, and placed the rabbit on the snow in front of her. "Rain is expecting cubs soon," Dapple spoke again, "Most likely tomorrow. It will be good for our pack to have more members. Cloudsky will lead us through yet. "
Flight noticed she didn't mention the other rival packs though, which was why the pack needed more members. She had hinted though, but it was better not to mention it, she thought, tearing into her catch. Speaking of the other rivals would only increase the tension in the pack, and that was the last thing they needed. Lately the pack had been weak, due to relentless attacks from Ice-eye's pack. He had been trying to gain territory, but had failed, although his attacks had weakened their pack.
A black male wolf called Midnight, shouldered his way past the other wolves until he faced Flight. He had overheard the conversation. "Cloudsky cannot lead this pack," he growled, "He is a weak alpha. I should be the one leading!"
"Cloudsky will never give in," Flight growled in return, "He is a strong leader, and he is too proud to admit defeat." When Midnight didn't reply, she continued. "He is a good leader too though. You must see that side of him as well. You should be loyal to him!"
Well, that's all for the moment, I haven't finshed Chapter One yet. Hope you enjoyed!
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