Need critiques on my MGB's

[lulinserama]

I have my Modern Game Bantams photos on this photobucket page. I hope I am doing this right. Is anyone showing modern games in Florida? I would love critques on my 4-6 month old chicks.
http://s867.photobucket.com/albums/ab234/lulinserama

Lulinserama (my other bantam breed)

 

[roosters4sale]

Hi. I like 4719a, 6371a&b. I like the muscle tone.

 

[cochin123]

where at in fl are you ?

 

[lulinserama]

We are in Weeki Wachee, Fl. 45 miles north of Tampa.

 

[acid_chipmunk]

I love your lemon blues! Do you sell hatching eggs?

 

[blackred]

Are you looking to have them critiqued as possible show birds or just as pets?

Bob

 

[lulinserama]

I am evaluating my pullets and cockerels to better my flock. I do show birds.

 

[blackred]

Pictures cannot tell the whole story but there are some major issues with your birds.

it seems that 1382 is the best of what I see in your pictures but he still has long wings and tail, his breast lacing is not too bad but the picture is blurry. He maybe knock-kneed, I can't tell.

1382e is not the same bird as above - has extremely bad shafting and lacing- this bird is a major cull

4719- long feathers especially the hackle - over laced and has shafting- he just isn't balanced with long back and big body

The Brown Red pullets are not too bad from what I can tell of them but they are still are not balanced - legs too short for such a long back and big body.

Over all I would say that these are not birds that you can breed show birds from, there are better birds to be had in Florida.
I am sorry if I have been a little rough but you did ask for a critique for show birds.
Good Luck- Bob