Opinions please?

[Zahboo]

This is my new website. I am trying to set up to sell eggs without having to send people 50000 emails showing them pictures. I don't know if it's ergonomic. If you see any gramatic or spelling errors please let me know what page, I haven't gone through it yet. I tryed to make it easy to use and fun to look at. Thanks

http://zahboopoultry.tripod.com/index.html

 

[Gonzo]

I think you did a really good job! Looks very professional!

 

[Zahboo]

Thanks. Also I have NO clue what to sell the eggs for and people sell mutt eggs on CL for 10, so I figured half a dozen for 10 that are full blooded and you NEVER see mottled cochins around here, was a decent price.

 

[Gonzo]

Check out the auctions here and on Ebay.... I have 5 standard cochins, and the lady I bought them from was getting $30.00 a dozen for their eggs! I've never sold eggs for hatching before, but I plan to, someday.... Good Luck!

 

[Zahboo]

I haven't hatched any so i don't know if the fertility is high, but I see the roo breed both hens. I hate making prices.

 

[Gonzo]

The main thing is survival of the shipping process.. that can affect the hatch rate alot.

 

[the lemon tree]

Great website! I only was able to read the title page and Cochin page and found a few typos-yes, because I'm OC when it comes to spelling and grammar. Hope you don't take offense, we're all friends here

Title page:

In the first paragraph "temperament" is misspelled

In the third paragraph "passionately" is misspelled

Cochin page:

"withstand" is one word

"cannot" is one word

"awhile" is one word

Hope this helps. I can go over the rest of the pages if you'd like. Otherwise, the layout looks great and love the blurbs that you include about each breed.

 

[Zahboo]

Find the more errors! LOL. I hate seeing misspelling and I know i'm not the only one