Pangea-The New Continent

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(Ooh awesome! Accepted I see we've got a real twist here I'll go add her to the article
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(Yep.)
 
Chloe could start to see the jungle.
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Jem fell...again. She started to worry.
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Brick looked down at the snake and sighed. (Ugh, I need to think of a good reason. HELP)
Brick sighed. "Across that river is what is rightfully mine. Something or rather someone, has taken it from me and its about time I took it back."
 
Chloe could start to see the jungle.
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Jem fell...again. She started to worry.
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Brick looked down at the snake and sighed. (Ugh, I need to think of a good reason. HELP)



Brick sighed. "Across that river is what is rightfully mine. Something or rather someone, has taken it from me and its about time I took it back." 

(Sorry I missed it)

Sunshine smiled when she saw the jungle.
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Paul sighed and said,"I'm not sure what to do but I know someone who does".
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Schlange hissed and said,"fine,"he slithered off again.

(Could Melody be like Sunshines mother and it all have been a big misunderstanding? Like she never found her mother after she chased away the hyenas so she came to the conclusion she had been killed? If not make a real plot twist)
 
(Sorry I missed it)

Sunshine smiled when she saw the jungle. Paul sighed and said,"I'm not sure what to do but I know someone who does". Schlange hissed and said,"fine,"he slithered off again.

(Could Melody be like Sunshines mother and it all have been a big misunderstanding? Like she never found her mother after she chased away the hyenas so she came to the conclusion she had been killed? If not make a real plot twist)
(UM..let me think about it for a minute)
Chloe kept walking,
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Jem looked at Paul, half in fear and half in confusion.
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Brick followed.
 
(K)

Sunshine looked at the dense forest.
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"He's um.....a......puffin,"said Paul.
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Schlange slithered along until they reached the swamps he stopped.
 
(So yes melody is Sunshines mom or no before I reply further then this)

Sunshine lifted her head.
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Paul said,"he can help you and make your foot heal faster".
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Schlange said,"ok so you must be careful where I don't you do see there's pockets of quicksand and there's leeches and electric eels and we have to go straight through the swamps to reach our destination and some spots are deeper then other spots some getting pretty deep".
 
(So yes melody is Sunshines mom or no before I reply further then this)

Sunshine lifted her head. Paul said,"he can help you and make your foot heal faster". Schlange said,"ok so you must be careful where I don't you do see there's pockets of quicksand and there's leeches and electric eels and we have to go straight through the swamps to reach our destination and some spots are deeper then other spots some getting pretty deep".
(Yeah I guess that works)
Chloe sighed. "Where is she.."
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Jem shook her head. "I don't like puffins." she tried to stand again and 'yelped' in pain.
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Brick nodded.
 
Sunshine thought Melody,Melody,Melody ,"MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!"she screamed.
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"I'll be back,"he started to walk away and while doing so said,"don't leave and I mean it".
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Eis the puffin was up on a ridge in the arctic where at the moment the winds roared.
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Schlange slithered into the water submerged.
 
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