Preview For Surviving The City: A Stray Dog Story

[Chickenfan4life]

you need to write some books!!!

Thanks.

 

[NovaAman]

I think you are quite talented in your writing. Needs a bit of editing to clear up redundancies, clarifying, removing unnecessary verbiage. It seems to be more of a general overview/backstory of what is to come... kinda like it's catching everyone up to speed very quickly to bring us all to the same page, if you understand what I mean. If this is your intent, then I think you did a phenomenal job.

 

[Chickenfan4life]

I think you are quite talented in your writing. Needs a bit of editing to clear up redundancies, clarifying, removing unnecessary verbiage. It seems to be more of a general overview/backstory of what is to come... kinda like it's catching everyone up to speed very quickly to bring us all to the same page, if you understand what I mean. If this is your intent, then I think you did a phenomenal job.

I do understand what you mean, and that's exactly what I was trying to do!!! Thank you!!! DD

 

[OwlLover]

This is great! Like Nova said you should go through it and edit, but that aside it's off to a great start!

 

[Chickenfan4life]

This is great! Like Nova said you should go through it and edit, but that aside it's off to a great start!

Thanks. Yours is great, too!

 

[Chickenfan4life]

Chapter one under construction; check back soon to see the revised version!

 

[Chickenfan4life]

(I am editing the chapter above to fix it. This is made possible by Pipdzipdandreadytogo, who spent a good part of her time editing it. Thanks, Pipd!!!