(No, just a good length. I usually write several paragraphs in death scenes (so sad))
Nyx started to run towards him and water, her skin burning despite the fact the flames were still several feet away. She squinted, trying to make out who it was. "M-Marzipan?" she yelled as loud as she could. The sound was barely a croak, but she was nearing the stream.
( Oh, thanks. Who has died? )
"help" He barked. He smacked his claws into the bank, he tried to pull him self out but the current was so strong.