*Running with the Flood* A Warrior Cat RP~Open~

Sunshine looked her over. "Okay so of you straighten your tail, then your balance could be better. I think that you should focus, however, on your front paws. Move them into a comfortable position, like this." She moved into her stance and showed her how she kept one in front and one in to keep her balance. "This way you can more easily judge your leap. How do you think we can both fix up our stances, Nighthowl? Any advice?"
Whiteshine smiled and thought It seems that Sunpaw has 3 mentors now! Sunpaw copied Sunshine's stance and felt her body balance a lot better.
 
Whiteshine smiled and thought It seems that Sunpaw has 3 mentors now! Sunpaw copied Sunshine's stance and felt her body balance a lot better.
Sunshine looked over Sunpaw again and nodded. "That's good. Feel any better balancewise? I like this stance, I made it up myself to make up for my size, it's useful for young apprentices who haven't grown into the other battle stances yet."
 
Sunshine looked over Sunpaw again and nodded. "That's good. Feel any better balancewise? I like this stance, I made it up myself to make up for my size, it's useful for young apprentices who haven't grown into the other battle stances yet."
"Yes, I can feel that my body is a lot more balanced. Thanks Sunshine! Whiteshine said something about a counter-attack..."
 
Nighthowl, seeing Sunpaw had more than enough correcting reaching her ears, kept his own criticism to himself, whispering to Whiteshine, “Thank you. I’ll hunt for the clan now. Sunpaw is in good paws.” He finished smiling, before padding into the surrounding undergrowth. @ladybugchickenfarms, I’m getting Lilyflight into the rp :D
 
Nighthowl, sewing Sunpaw had more than enough correcting reaching her ears, kept his own criticism to himself, whispering to Whiteshine, “Thank you. I’ll hunt for the clan now. Sunpaw is in good paws.” He finished smiling, before padding into the surrounding undergrowth. @ladybugchickenfarms, I’m getting Lilyflight into the rp :D
Strikewhisper walked along near the training hollow, hoping to catch Whiteshine, done training.
 
Nighthowl, sewing Sunpaw had more than enough correcting reaching her ears, kept his own criticism to himself, whispering to Whiteshine, “Thank you. I’ll hunt for the clan now. Sunpaw is in good paws.” He finished smiling, before padding into the surrounding undergrowth. @ladybugchickenfarms, I’m getting Lilyflight into the rp :D
(Lol, thanks.)
 
Nighthowl, sewing Sunpaw had more than enough correcting reaching her ears, kept his own criticism to himself, whispering to Whiteshine, “Thank you. I’ll hunt for the clan now. Sunpaw is in good paws.” He finished smiling, before padding into the surrounding undergrowth. @ladybugchickenfarms, I’m getting Lilyflight into the rp :D
"No problem, anytime. You were a great help. Whoever your apprentice will be, will be a very lucky one indeed." Whiteshine whispered back. She straightend and said, "I think Sunpaw has had enough for today. She needs a nice fat piece of prey and some rest."
 
"No problem, anytime. You were a great help. Whoever your apprentice will be, will be a very lucky one indeed." Whiteshine whispered back. She straightend and said, "I think Sunpaw has had enough for today. She needs a nice fat piece of prey and some rest."
Sunshine nodded and turned to see Strikewhisper padding into the hollow. "Sunpaw why don't you head to camp." She whispered to Whiteshine, "Someone is here for you..."
 

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