~Story~ A New Home- a hen discovers A good life (Chapter 11 FINALLY!!)

[TechnoCat]

I want more! I DEFINETLY WANT MORE!
If you don't post more I'll kill you in your sleep.
I am also writing a story:
https://www.backyardchickens.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=608874&p=1
check it out if you want.

 

[chickenlover91]

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I dont wanna die!! lol
I read your book, I LOVE IT!! you and some else inspired me to right this book!! thank you
More soon, cuz i dont wanna die tonight!

 

[TechnoCat]

Quote:
I dont wanna die!! lol
I read your book, I LOVE IT!! you and some else inspired me to right this book!! thank you
More soon, cuz i dont wanna die tonight!

Thanks for the kind words. I just put up a new chapter so if you want go check it out.
Do more NOW or I'll come to your house because I know where you live... maybe...
Ok, I actually don't but there's always google...

 

[chickenlover91]

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I dont wanna die!! lol
I read your book, I LOVE IT!! you and some else inspired me to right this book!! thank you
More soon, cuz i dont wanna die tonight!

Thanks for the kind words. I just put up a new chapter so if you want go check it out.
Do more NOW or I'll come to your house because I know where you live... maybe...
Ok, I actually don't but there's always google...

Awesome! You know were i live!!! ok, ok im posting it! lol

 

[chickenlover91]

Here it is!

Chapter 5
A real life nightmare

Once the bottom of the bucket was filled with little chicks like me, we were then place on something kind of like a moving table. I saw other chicks being thrown into a metal bucket like thing, I noticed the monsters whom I found out were called humans, were throwing the girls in to the right bucket and the boys into the left one “why?” I wondered. And “am I next?” I was getting closer, and closer to where the human was standing, when all the sudden I was picked up again!
I was then thrown into the cold, deep, metal bucket which led to a whole different room, and in that room there was more humans! Then I heard the most deathly scream I had ever heard! And the smell of feces, blood, and death! “Please let this just be a nightmare!” I prayed, as I was picked up again and then all I felt was pain as they burned half of my beak off! I was then thrown into a small, cold, cage with 6 other girl chicks.

 

[chickenlover91]

any thoughts?

 

[TechnoCat]

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AMAZING! yet sad...
sorry if this sounds stupid, but what is a battery hen?

 

[TechnoCat]

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Thanks for the kind words. I just put up a new chapter so if you want go check it out.
Do more NOW or I'll come to your house because I know where you live... maybe...
Ok, I actually don't but there's always google...

Awesome! You know were i live!!! ok, ok im posting it! lol

I actually don't...

 

[chickenlover91]

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AMAZING! yet sad...
sorry if this sounds stupid, but what is a battery hen?

Its not stupid, a lot of people don't know what a battery cage hen is, here is some information on it. Its sad but it does happen! look up Battery cage hen pictures if you wanna get a better understanding


There are 30,000,000 chickens in this country - 85% of these are 'living' in Battery Farms.
70% of the above are kept in sheds containing 20,000 birds or more, some up to 100,000.
The minimum legal requirement of space for one bird is just under three quarters the size of an A4 sheet of paper.
Most farms have 4 or 5 birds per cage. The cages being approx. 20 inches x 20 inches (500 x 500)
Cages usually extending from one end of the shed to the other, up to six stacks high.
With artificial 'sunrise and sunset' plus fortified foods, the average annual egg yield of one hen is 338 per year.
Over 2,000,000 chickens die in their cages each year from disease caused by improper control of faeces clearing.
Chicken beaks are cut to stop them causing too much damage to each other.
They spend approximately 72 weeks in this condition before they are slaughtered for pet food, even pies for us.
By then, most are suffering from brittle bones caused by standing on the wire bottoms of their cages.

 

[TechnoCat]

Oh, that's awful!

These poor animals are DEFENSLESS! They have no choice! That's not even fair...
I looked up pictures of them, it made me cry!!!
I feel so horrible for these animals!
Ugh, this is why I hate some people...