Story.

[Lady Darkmoon]

Prologue

Lady Darkmoon ran through the forest, it was dark and cold, her cloak flew behind her. She heard the barking of the dogs chasing her, she pulled the satchel from under her cloak. it was the item she had been hoping for, she decided she had run long enough she took out a small crossbow she had dipped several darts in a perfume she wore. She loaded the dart and then fired it, the dart flew away from her and a few seconds later she heard a dull thump. she jumped and grabbed a branch of an ancient oak and swung up into it, she climbed about thirty feet high and then stopped, her breaths blew steam into the air, she heard the barks off in the distance, they had been doped again by Lady Darkmoon.
Master Assassin.

Would You Like More Of This Story, If I Get Four Voted (Yes.) Then I Will Post Another Chapter.​

 

[TechnoCat]

It is good, however you don't need to capitalize every letter - only 'I' and names of people or places or whatever crap like that. (Sorry, that's my pet peeve.) Also, it would help to shorten your sentences. Most of your sentences are run-ons. The idea, however, I love. Quite creative. ^-^

 

[Lady Darkmoon]

Thanks! Ill edit it!

 

[TechnoCat]

^-^

 

[Lady Darkmoon]

All edited up!

 

[TechnoCat]

Also, crossbows don't shoot darts. They shoot arrows. XD I used to have a crossbow, trust me, I know. XD But that's much better. ^-^

 

[Lady Darkmoon]

No they Shoot darts, its not a 2h crossbow its a crossbow about five inches long.

 

[TechnoCat]

*i'm a phail* I was imagining a PSE Tac 15 crossbow... Sue me. (JUSTKIDDINGJUSTKIDDINGJUSTKIDDING. It's what I say when I fail.)

 

[Lady Darkmoon]

Okay i need just 2 more votes!

 

[Lady Darkmoon]

One more and you'lll get Chapter 1 today!