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Rose Quartz said:
I'm workin on it. XD It's difficult.
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I just think it’s funny you put so much effort into the wings and then... hair color? Not relevant.

A whole month had passed since Peregrine had had the subversive conversation with Gia. Peregrine stood in the doorway of his brand new hut. He had spent the last five days constructing it, guided by his father.
Peregrine gazed at the huts hanging beside his. His parents’, Mal’s and Pel’s.
Compared to his parents’ neat, leaf woven hut, Mal’s grass hut looked pretty lopsided. Even in grass, however, Pel’s handiwork was proving to be a carbon copy of his father’s careful weave.
Peregrine had matured over the past month, though the changes were only physical. He grew taller and his brown feathers grew longer. Peregrine was no longer the chick-fluff adorned pudgy fledgling he had once been. Even so, it would still be a year before he grew his adult plumage.
 
Amer said:
I just think it’s funny you put so much effort into the wings and then... hair color? Not relevant.

A whole month had passed since Peregrine had had the subversive conversation with Gia. Peregrine stood in the doorway of his brand new hut. He had spent the last five days constructing it, guided by his father.
Peregrine gazed at the huts hanging beside his. His parents’, Mal’s and Pel’s.
Compared to his parents’ neat, leaf woven hut, Mal’s grass hut looked pretty lopsided. Even in grass, however, Pel’s handiwork was proving to be a carbon copy of his father’s careful weave.
Peregrine had matured over the past month, though the changes were only physical. He grew taller and his brown feathers grew longer. Peregrine was no longer the chick-fluff adorned pudgy fledgling he had once been. Even so, it would still be a year before he grew his adult plumage.
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Hahahahah well I don't have colors for her yet. But probably blond? Pretty sure blue eyes.

I'm having computer issues so I'm waiting in the hopes it doesn't need to be shut down to fix whatever is going on.

Don't remember when I last saved and I just sorta finished the rough linework.
 
Amer said:
I just think it’s funny you put so much effort into the wings and then... hair color? Not relevant.

A whole month had passed since Peregrine had had the subversive conversation with Gia. Peregrine stood in the doorway of his brand new hut. He had spent the last five days constructing it, guided by his father.
Peregrine gazed at the huts hanging beside his. His parents’, Mal’s and Pel’s.
Compared to his parents’ neat, leaf woven hut, Mal’s grass hut looked pretty lopsided. Even in grass, however, Pel’s handiwork was proving to be a carbon copy of his father’s careful weave.
Peregrine had matured over the past month, though the changes were only physical. He grew taller and his brown feathers grew longer. Peregrine was no longer the chick-fluff adorned pudgy fledgling he had once been. Even so, it would still be a year before he grew his adult plumage.
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AHA
EXACTLY
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Amer said:
I just think it’s funny you put so much effort into the wings and then... hair color? Not relevant.

A whole month had passed since Peregrine had had the subversive conversation with Gia. Peregrine stood in the doorway of his brand new hut. He had spent the last five days constructing it, guided by his father.
Peregrine gazed at the huts hanging beside his. His parents’, Mal’s and Pel’s.
Compared to his parents’ neat, leaf woven hut, Mal’s grass hut looked pretty lopsided. Even in grass, however, Pel’s handiwork was proving to be a carbon copy of his father’s careful weave.
Peregrine had matured over the past month, though the changes were only physical. He grew taller and his brown feathers grew longer. Peregrine was no longer the chick-fluff adorned pudgy fledgling he had once been. Even so, it would still be a year before he grew his adult plumage.
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This works well. The only advice is, you're using his name a lot, when 'he' would have worked just fine. And you missed a comma that made it sound like Mal and Pel lived together.
 

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