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why... am I struggling so badly to write Aros's first post

THOMAS'S HAIR JUST DO BE THAT FINE THO

<3
I had said, with raw honesty, "some people were dropped as babies
pretty sure someone threw me, I got hit by a ceiling fan, and then proceeded to be chucked out of a 5-story up window"

: D
All four of those guys are just straight up four different kinds of chaotic energy manifested as corporeal beings XD
I've got hair fic to write now

OH YOU OF PERFECT RECALL
WHAT A WONDERFUL STATE OF MIND IT MUST BE
I will try and keep her the same
you have no choice in the matter
I’m sorryyyyy

:0 does that mean someone is finally adopting him?


I don’t want to write an intro post. Halp.
She might just be tempted to get over her terminal detachment for him, perhaps 💅







wow that was ridiculously punny
I'm on another level with my dad jokes
River that was a masterpiece. :bow
oh no



O h n o i m t e r r i f i e d
says all i need to know
All of your intro posts are absolutely amazing, and I swear I need to start mine. XD
Imagine even having started something
Does 30 cups of tea count
u bri'ish m8te
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Hands suck, but enjoy.
Z E R O
OH MY WORD I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHO THIS IS
Okie siverrtorm slep well after drinking your aquacito <3
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I'll take that threat thanks
 
I prefer the Fabian one. But that is probably personal preference.

I don't know how to word the difference. I guess Fabian is written from perspective, we don't know if what's written is fully accurate but they act on what they perceive. Where as with Leita it feels like she's telling me literally what's happening, her perspective is an after thought.

I don't think there's anything wrong with either, it's just different. I've been trying to mesh the two types together, but I don't know if it really works, it feels awkward doing it.
 
Those were
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I've got hair fic to write now

OH YOU OF PERFECT RECALL
WHAT A WONDERFUL STATE OF MIND IT MUST BE

you have no choice in the matter

She might just be tempted to get over her terminal detachment for him, perhaps 💅







wow that was ridiculously punny
I'm on another level with my dad jokes

oh no



O h n o i m t e r r i f i e d

says all i need to know

Imagine even having started something

u bri'ish m8te

Z E R O
OH MY WORD I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHO THIS IS

I'll take that threat thanks
I actually am, RIP
 
I prefer the Fabian one. But that is probably personal preference.

I don't know how to word the difference. I guess Fabian is written from perspective, we don't know if what's written is fully accurate but they act on what they perceive. Where as with Leita it feels like she's telling me literally what's happening, her perspective is an after thought.

I don't think there's anything wrong with either, it's just different. I've been trying to mesh the two types together, but I don't know if it really works, it feels awkward doing it.
I think I agree. I was/am still awkward with Leita, so the writing is stiff and not really characteristic. But Fabian's is spaced well, and it feels better, even if I've not nailed the personalities yet. XD
 
hi you all scare me you all write incredibly well and my mediocre word vomiting does not belong here im so sorry
i will try but will never succeed in being as wonderful as you all are
I think we all feel the same as you. What we write isn't good enough. But the only way to get better is to write, and the only way to get more comfortable is to put it out there.

I don't think we're judging other peoples writing critically. Maybe looking at how everyone else is better than our own. :p There's so much fiddling work I want to do with mine, but I guess I decided I worked long enough. It is a snapshot of where I am writing wise at this point, and while extra time spent could make it better, the amount of frustration isn't worth the struggle to make it better, and possibly lose the intended feeling. ???

It's the same as art, it may not be perfect but there's a point where improving on what you've got isn't worth the stress. Or maybe admitting to myself that I'm not at that stage yet? Where I can do better.

Almost like I need to improve on my building blocks to improve on the outcome. But not knowing where to begin.... I've gone on and on here... :p Hopefully my point isn't lost in wordiness.
 
hi you all scare me you all write incredibly well and my mediocre word vomiting does not belong here im so sorry
i will try but will never succeed in being as wonderful as you all are
I READ YOUR POST AND YOU'RE NOWHERE NEAR AS BAD AS YOU SAY???

I think we all feel the same as you. What we write isn't good enough. But the only way to get better is to write, and the only way to get more comfortable is to put it out there.

I don't think we're judging other peoples writing critically. Maybe looking at how everyone else is better than our own. :p There's so much fiddling work I want to do with mine, but I guess I decided I worked long enough. It is a snapshot of where I am writing wise at this point, and while extra time spent could make it better, the amount of frustration isn't worth the struggle to make it better, and possibly lose the intended feeling. ???

It's the same as art, it may not be perfect but there's a point where improving on what you've got isn't worth the stress. Or maybe admitting to myself that I'm not at that stage yet? Where I can do better.

Almost like I need to improve on my building blocks to improve on the outcome. But not knowing where to begin.... I've gone on and on here... :p Hopefully my point isn't lost in wordiness.
I agree!

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The thing is, I don't think anyone is ever completely content with what they create. We always judge ourselves by our own shortcomings, when the only thing that should matter that much is how much fun we had doing it. That's rarely the case though. XD
 

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