Quote: Wow what a lot of info. I'm sure you put a lot of effort into planning and wording this. As one who has only received shipped eggs a few times, I learned a lot mainly about days to ship on. Please take the following with a grain of salt. I would try to make the request shorter or more concise, people love to skim. Maybe bold the positive value lines eg The best shipping days are.... Then possibly try starting each numbered point off with the positive value statement and closing each point with a feel good statement as well. A happy buttered up egg shipper is more likely to send the best eggs on the best day than a grumpy pants who got offended skimming your preferences. Lastly, I'm thinking a washing sanding of eggs point would be worth adding. I know I don't want dirty or washed eggs. Thanks for letting me know I could ask to be able to pick up the eggs too. I know there is a egg killer somewhere near me in the PO system and eliminating one or more handlers might help.