The Lonely Hen --This is one of my chicken stories--

[Magic Birdie]

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Even if she doesn't, she'll kill me

 

[Magic Birdie]

Ok, I'm dead

 

[ChickenPeep]

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Goodbye world!

 

[Magic Birdie]

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Goodbye world!

oh no!!! <3chickenforever is killing us!

 

[<3ChickenForever]

Chapter 41

Once I got to the small clearing Bambi was gone and so were my Little Miracles!
"Lilly!? Rose!? Where are you!?" I shouted.
"Mommy, mommy!" Lily churped, she finally started calling me mommy and not mammy..
I looked up and they were in a tree.
Rose shouted down to me, "Watch out! Fox is somewhere!"
I looked all around and no fox, but I rushed up in the tree that Lilly and Rose were stayng in and cuddled them. They were scared and crying. I comforted them with my words.
"It's alright, it's alright. Mommy's got you."
They still cried on. Why do foxes keep showing up!? I hated them! All we wanna do is get home safely and that darned fox is ruining it! I saw him come into sight and I glared at him like I was about to rip his head off....
"Mommy, I see it. Tell him to go away! Tell him that-that no one likes him!" Lilly said with rage.
"Now Lilly... of course no one likes him! He should know that by now." I soothed her with my words.
She smiled a little bit. "Promise?"
I smiled back. "I promise." I knew no one liked him or just foxes in genral!
I looked to Rose. "Rose, honey... you alright?"
She looked at me with the biggest an saddest eyes, "Mommy, I hurt..."
"Where? Where does it hurt?" I askes a bit concerned.
She pointed to her inner wing and it was cut there!
"Rose! How did this happen?" I asked, astonished.
"That meanie clawed me!" then she pointed to the snarling fox with her tiny wing.
"Awww, honey...." The cut wasn't bad, but it needed to be patched up. "We are going to try so hard with that cut, alright?"
She nodded and started crying.

 

[ChickenPeep]

Wow, i came back to life! I wonder why. Oh its because you wrote another chapter!!

 

[chickenpredatorkiller]

WRITE ANOTHER ONE PLEASSEEEEEEEEEEEeE. I just read that whole story in one sitting.... it is SO FREAKING ADDICTING! I really think you should make a book and publish it. I KNOW that it would do REALLY good. Especially if you wrote a whole series. Its an original idea. A story about chickens from the chickens perspective. PLEASE write another one.

 

[fuzziecreatures]

Excellent story

 

[<3ChickenForever]

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Aww thank you so much!

 

[Magic Birdie]

Why can't they just go home already?? I want to know what happens!!