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-Shade- said:
Hopefully, I can maintain it for the rest of the RP. When I rush, my bits come out absolute garbage

Ahh, I see what you mean. I tried rereading it while taking the ly off the end of some of the abverbs and it was pretty solid. I'll try that more, thanks Cap
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Yes! And sometimes you have to reword whole sentences. It becomes ingrained in your mind after a while, and it promotes well-thought writing.

Alright... Gotta make a character... Let's see 🤔
 
Isabella5Storm3 said:
(here goes)
Galen stood in a large clearing surrounded by forest. He sighed as yet another attempt at landing the knife in a far-off tree ended again in it bouncing off and tumbling in the leaves on the forest floor. This blade was off-balance even though he had spent hours crafting it. He shook his head in defeat and went to fetch it.
He knelt and brushed his hand through the leaves until it met hard metal. Grasping it firmly, his eyes wandered up and down the blade. This knife was supposed to be one of his finest works but something had gone wrong. this was not a good witness to his skill. It was beautiful but not functional.
He stood and placed the knife in his satchel. There was more work to be done on it.
In one strong beat of his wings, was aloft. He streaked up into the sky and then dipped and flew low over the trees toward home.
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Isa, I don't think I've ever seen you RP before, this is really good
 
_-Captain BRM-_ said:
Ugggghhhh. It's so hard not knowing where the story is going to revolve 💀
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For real. That's why I'm not gonna make a secondary antagonist until after I see where this is going otherwise I am just gonna make a MESS

(Y'all ever hit the freaking power button on your computer trying to use the backspace key? God I hate Chromebooks, the layout is so lazy. Just be trying to type, all of the sudden your computer's like "GOODBYE. *dies*")
 
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_-Captain BRM-_ said:
Donald Trump Reaction GIF by Election 2016
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Rats.
 
-Shade- said:
The wind hissed loudly, gnashing invisible teeth at the cutting edges of the wingtips, groaning and tugging untamable as it churned from the ocean and tumbled back into the pitch darkness again.
Biting, growling, whispering, and pulling, it ran invasively through the tight-nit crest of feathers, creating an ever-droning white noise of whistles and whimpers.
Darkness. The shrouding cover of mist and clouds engulfed the sky, absorbing any light that one may have imagined from the stars or moon somewhere above.
Lights flickered faintly like dying candles, distant below the low-hanging ocean mist, as if looking down at the stars on a hazy night rather than up.
Wings tilted back, the black feathers caught the torrential air, pulling backward before turning and swooping around again, continuing the ever-repeating lazy spiral.
Pirate's Cove glittered defiantly below, unmoving but alive in the otherwise pitch-black and ominous night. Ember cocked her head toward the sprawling town, red eyes flicking emotionless over the collection of lights.
She pulled tightly around again, hovering slightly as the wind shoved at her wings irritably. The Harpy looped around again, continuing her thoughtful observation of the community miles below, wondering absently if there was really anything worth her time here.
The spiral continued a few more times. Drifting, turning, hovering, before looping back - an endless cycle. Deathly silent against the wind, tucked invisible behind the hazy mask of clouds.
She finally yanked backward quickly, twisting in the air and tilting her wings back like sails on the mast of a ship. The frigid void of mist and wind streaked past as the Harpy was pulled away, soaring off toward the coast, leaving the quiet watch over the town behind.


(It's good to be back)
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:love
 
_-Captain BRM-_ said:
Yes! And sometimes you have to reword whole sentences. It becomes ingrained in your mind after a while, and it promotes well-thought writing.

Alright... Gotta make a character... Let's see 🤔
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Maybe you could make a dude tryin to become the Wolfwalker Alpha, or someone who has somethin to do with Aerie, or ANOTHER HARPY, or.. I dunno.

To be honest, I can also see you choosing absolutely anything that is NOT a character I just said just to spite me guessing what you’re going to do.
 
Name: Jordan Tay
Gender: Female
Age: 19
Species: Human
Physical Appearance: Whatever.
Personality: We shall see
Backstory: We shall see

I love how my forms are so helpful and descriptive.

In all seriousness, she's a work in progress, so let me freakin figure her out first before I start jotting down things she just isn't. I met her like two minutes ago, bruh. Maybe I'll make an official form later. But I need to write her to learn her.

But anyway. Is this acceptable, my dear MJ?
 
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