This is my story if you read please don't copy it! I have worked very hard on this story and am looking into publishing it! ENJOY!!
Please forgive all spelling and punction errors as I am using my cell phone! Thanks.
Chapter 1 Eclipse
The great moon rose high, casting its pale reflection on the river. The river this night was a raging, deadly torrent that snaked its way through a valley. The valley lay south of Granite peak and most nights was calm and quite. But tonight it erupted with choas!!
In the light of the moon a white wolf staggered into a clearing, her name was Snowflower. Seconds later a beautiful black wolf burst out of the trees, her name was Eclipse. Eclipse had finally caught up with the intruder and began to close in. Snowflower was out of options, the chase had taken it toll on her old body and she was no match for the young Eclipse. As Eclipse moved in the ill and starving Snowflower backed towards the river. Eclipse leapt, just as the earth beanth Snowflower gave out...the white wolf was lost to the river! Free of her intruder Eclipse set off to find food....