~<>the pet store<>~a pet store role play.

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Kaz laid in his cage, rolled up in somewhat of a ball. His nose was scrunched up from the bad odor of the room he was held in. He wished he could just be set free, but he knew that wish could never come true. With his one good eye, he looked around at the other animals.
 
I'm gonna try and do all three at once, if you don't understand it I'll edit it

Namw:Axel,Sky,Shirley
Age:4 days,4days,4days
Gender:male, female, female
Species: chicken
Breed:mix
Ankmal,Human,Worker:animal,animal,animal
Mean/nice:Nice,nice,nice
Personality:Brave,aggressive toward new animals/chickens otherwise sweet \\// Swwet,caring,bubbly \\// hyper,loveable,skittish
Description:larger, thickly fluffed, yellow/tan chick with dark brown designs in fluff, has a single comb \\// lavender colored chick with pale yellow under belly and black around eyes, has a single comb \\// blaxk/grey and white chick with patterns similar to a SLW chick but has gold coloring near legs and spread throughout her patterns,has a rose comb
History: caught by people with mother and brought to a pet shop
Username:LilJoe
Other:none
 
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Ming-Ming yowled for attention as Kristie came near her cage and banged on, Ming-Ming backed up while Kristen was banging on her cage, flattening her self to the ground, Kristie walked towards Kaz ' s cage with an angry look on her face (sorry if I don't RP correctly this way I'm used to another way)
 
LilJoe said:
Ming-Ming yowled for attention as Kristie came near her cage and banged on, Ming-Ming backed up while Kristen was banging on her cage, flattening her self to the ground, Kristie walked towards Kaz ' s cage with an angry look on her face (sorry if I don't RP correctly this way I'm used to another way)
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(It's fine, I recommend probably seperating their actions like this:

Bob swung on the swings at the park
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Hannah went over to an ice cream truck and bought herself a Popsicle.
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Bob, seeing the ice cream truck at the end of the park, jumped off the swing and ran over, along with many other children.

This could probably help other people understand what you're trying to say instead of it all together, since it may confuse them.)

Kaz noticed that a human girl was walking towards his cage. His lips curled at the human, barring his teeth as he got up to his feet, growling. His ears pinned down at her since he wasn't a big fan of humans, especially her. He glared at her with his one good eye.
 
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LittleBrownie said:
(It's fine, I recommend probably seperating their actions like this:

Bob swung on the swings at the park
--
Hannah went over to an ice cream truck and bought herself a Popsicle.
--
Bob, seeing the ice cream truck at the end of the park, jumped off the swing and ran over, along with many other children.

This could probably help other people understand what you're trying to say instead of it all together, since it may confuse them.)

Kaz noticed that a human girl was walking towards his cage. His lips curled at the human, barring his teeth as he got up to his feet, growling. His ears pinned down at her since he wasn't a big fan of humans, especially her. He glared at her with his one good eye.
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thanks I will)

Kristie stopped at his cage then smiled banging on it ,looking at Kaz she stopped, and said in a mocking voice,"Is da poor wittle puppy scared?"
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Ming-Ming peered through her cage at Kristie ,flexing her claws
 
LilJoe said:
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thanks I will)

Kristie stopped at his cage then smiled banging on it ,looking at Kaz she stopped, and said in a mocking voice,"Is da poor wittle puppy scared?"
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Ming-Ming peered through her cage at Kristie ,flexing her claws
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Kaz snarled and started to bark at her; ignoring the banging of the cage.
 
Kristie harshly patted Kaz's head.almost a slap then left going into another room closing the door behind her.
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Ming-Ming sniffed the air sighing with relief that her scent had become a little fainter though not gone.
 
Kaz nearly snapped at her when she patted him. Once she left, he relaxed his tensed body. After a while he went back to normal, as if nothing happened.
 

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