Hey Gertrude, could you read through this and find any mistakes I may have made? I haven't written the shoes and such up yet but will get them when I post the RP.
^*^A New World^*^ (ROLEPLAY)
2148 A.D.
To whomever finds this:
They're coming! Run! Hide! Don't let them catch you! The end is near and if you end up under their rule... The worst is yet to come. Get out while you can! Their reign is impossible to escape! Hurry, leave! Don't do as they say; you'll end up just as bad. You, you must save the future generations! But, in order to do so, you'll have to work together.
I give you my best wishes - Malcolm Williams; The only sane person left. July 24, 2148
2178 A.D. 30 years later
"Good evening, all." The man paused. "Today is the day, that after 30 long years, 30 long and war filled years, we celebrate independence. Creos, is finally free from Zanpia!" The crowd erupted in hurrahs. The man raised his hand and the crowd hushed. "But, we must not forget our Superiors whom have fought so hard for this day. Not physically, but they have given us so much for the independence of this country. I would like to introduce you to our president, our leader, our Superior; Eleanor Galloway." An elderly woman with greying hair appears and the crowd hurrahs some more. "Welcome." She says and the audience is quiet once again. "Welcome to the new country of Creos! Along with this new freedom, comes new responsibilities, new jobs, and new technology. A very small group of scientists have created a serum that is injected into everybody whom is 18 years old or more. This serum is to amplify the health, stamina, speed, agility, and accuracy of each and everyone's job. After all, we cannot have a country who's foundation is weak, am I correct?" She paused and the crowed shouted a many 'yeah!' "Anyone 15 through 18 will be attending a special class three times a week to gain a better understanding of how their elders, their Superiors, have gained the independence of the great and noble country. They will also be shaped into great young adults who will learn how their Superiors want Creos to be lead." She finished and walked off of the stage. The crowd roared with many joyous shouts but soon everyone started leaving and going home.
Recently, a friend of your's found this strange letter from 30 years ago. You have no idea what its supposed to mean but you think its got something to do with the new Superiors. You're a teenager between the ages of 15 and 18. You go to the special classes and your parents get the special serum. But lately, your parents act more like zombies than your regular parents. They've been taking the serum for about a month now and there are some serious side effects (zombie-like behavior, sleep deprivation, and short-term memory loss to name a few). YOU must figure this out and stop your Superiors from doing this. But, how?
^*^A New World^*^ (ROLEPLAY)
2148 A.D.
To whomever finds this:
They're coming! Run! Hide! Don't let them catch you! The end is near and if you end up under their rule... The worst is yet to come. Get out while you can! Their reign is impossible to escape! Hurry, leave! Don't do as they say; you'll end up just as bad. You, you must save the future generations! But, in order to do so, you'll have to work together.
I give you my best wishes - Malcolm Williams; The only sane person left. July 24, 2148
2178 A.D. 30 years later
"Good evening, all." The man paused. "Today is the day, that after 30 long years, 30 long and war filled years, we celebrate independence. Creos, is finally free from Zanpia!" The crowd erupted in hurrahs. The man raised his hand and the crowd hushed. "But, we must not forget our Superiors whom have fought so hard for this day. Not physically, but they have given us so much for the independence of this country. I would like to introduce you to our president, our leader, our Superior; Eleanor Galloway." An elderly woman with greying hair appears and the crowd hurrahs some more. "Welcome." She says and the audience is quiet once again. "Welcome to the new country of Creos! Along with this new freedom, comes new responsibilities, new jobs, and new technology. A very small group of scientists have created a serum that is injected into everybody whom is 18 years old or more. This serum is to amplify the health, stamina, speed, agility, and accuracy of each and everyone's job. After all, we cannot have a country who's foundation is weak, am I correct?" She paused and the crowed shouted a many 'yeah!' "Anyone 15 through 18 will be attending a special class three times a week to gain a better understanding of how their elders, their Superiors, have gained the independence of the great and noble country. They will also be shaped into great young adults who will learn how their Superiors want Creos to be lead." She finished and walked off of the stage. The crowd roared with many joyous shouts but soon everyone started leaving and going home.
Recently, a friend of your's found this strange letter from 30 years ago. You have no idea what its supposed to mean but you think its got something to do with the new Superiors. You're a teenager between the ages of 15 and 18. You go to the special classes and your parents get the special serum. But lately, your parents act more like zombies than your regular parents. They've been taking the serum for about a month now and there are some serious side effects (zombie-like behavior, sleep deprivation, and short-term memory loss to name a few). YOU must figure this out and stop your Superiors from doing this. But, how?
I've got to make some changes. 
I will probably post it tomorrow.
