Quote: "Battle moves." Smokewhisker flicked her tail. "Shadowpaw,
don't stop. Keep practicing until it's decent."
"Yes, Smokewhisker."
(Is it okay if I have his mentor? lol)
Thistleclaw instructed Dawnpaw to do a simple battle move. He showed her how to duck under an attack, roll, so her belly wasn't exposed, spring up again and attack.
(Lol!!)
Dawnpaw watched with wide, awestruck eyes. "Awesome! Can I try?!"
"Go right ahead." Thistleclaw smiled. "I'll pretend to attack, and you do the move.. ready, go." he lunged at her.
Dawnpaw executed the roll almost perfectly, but tripped up near the end and her attack missed. "Darn."
Thistleclaw purred softly. "No worries. You did the roll nearly perfect. It takes practice." he smiled. "Now, again."
(Hey, we need you on Empires.
)
Dawnpaw did it again, and this time, did it correctly.
(okies!)
(
https://www.backyardchickens.com/t/828068/maplestars-destiny)
"Great job!" Thistleclaw purred.
(Thank ya!)
(I'm gonna go read it.

)
"Yay!" Dawnpaw mewed happily.
(Crap. My throat's super sore.
Here comes having a cotton swab jammed down my throat...)
(Hope you feel better soon!)