~Warriors RP II~

[Perfect Polish]

sorry gtg

 

[OwlLover]

Bearkit ran to Sorrelstar when is our apprentice ceramony he asked boucning up in down.
( i wanted spottedkit to be med cat apprentice ok)

"Tonight," Sorrelstar chuckled.

(sure)

 

[OwlLover]

Quote: Shadowpelt nodded. "Yes Cloudshade, I'll go." he muttered, too overcome by grief to speak louder.

Quote: Dustkit wrinkled his nose in defiance, as Lionkit shot his brother a stern glare. "Yes mama." he replied. "Yes mama." Dustkit mimicked in a high pitch voice. Lionkit rolled his eyes.


Cloudshade nodded, then headed to the back of the den. She got the traveling herbs out.

Specklefur sighed with exasperation. She then realized that Ebonykit had sneaked away. "Off creating trouble again, most likely," she muttered, padding out. She felt strange.

Outside, Ebonykit was talking with Shadowkit. "Mama said we couldn't go see Troutfur today because she's not feeling well. Well, if she can't, then why don't we?"

Shadowkit nodded vigorously. "Good idea!" She bounded out of camp with Ebonykit. Shadowpelt stared at the sleeping form of Silverstripe. He sighed, licking her cheek.


Dustkit smirked, padding up behind Lionkit. He jumped at him, chewing on his ear. Lionkit snarled, flipping his brother.


Troutfur waited patiently, eager to see his mate and kits.

Silverstripe stirred, but didn't wake.

"Boys." Specklefur said sternly, though it was a bit weak. Her breaths came out raggedly. "Don't fight... I don't feel good. I don't want to handle your fights right now." She laid down, closing her eyes.

"Where's Fourtrees?" Shadowkit asked.

"We're not going to Fourtrees!" Ebonykit replied, bopping Shadowkit on the head. "Silly! Daddy's in RiverClan."

"But, mama says that we shouldn't go into other Clan's territories!" Shadowkit protested, a bit uneasy.

"Oh, so what? We're just going to see our daddy." She came to the gorge.

"We have to cross that?" Shadowkit gulped. "It looks dangerous..."

"Danger is my middle name!" Ebonykit called boldly. "Oh come on, don't be a mouse!" Grinning determinedly, she bunched her legs and jumped. "Ah!" She fell into the river. Shadowpelt waited, just staring at the silver warrior he had once been good friends with. He sighed. He missed those days.

Dustkit huffed, sitting down. Lionkit nodded, "Sorry mama." he said, nuzzling up to her. He curled up in her fur. He frowned. His mother's scent of different... kind of sour. Inwardly, he shrugged. She had probably just eaten something. Dustkit scowled at his brother and curled up by himself.

Troutfur's ears shot up. He had heard Ebonykit's scream. Leaping away towards it, he saw Shadowkit by the gorge. "Shadowkit!! What's going on?" he asked his daughter. Weakly, as if it took all of her energy to do so, she licked Lionkit's forehead, then laid it back down. She felt so fatigued.

"Ebonykit fell in the river!" Shadowkit cried, looking at Troutfur, then the river. Lionkit imediately became aware that something was wrong. "Mama! Are you okay?" He asked, his tiny voice cracking with fright.
Dustkit lifted his head. His ears drooped. "What's wrong?" He asked timidly.

Troutfur's heart skipped a beat. "Oh no." He muttered, then leaped into the river. His large semi webbed paws churned the water as he eyed the surface for his daughter.

"Yeah... I'm fine." She murmured. She suddenly remembered: Ebonykit and Shadowkit! "I-I'll be back," she said to her kits, rising to her paws. Her legs quivered, but she fought. They could be getting into any kind of trouble now. She padded out of the camp entrance; her vision was blurred. She was so dizzy, she didn't even realize she was going towards the Thunderpath instead of Fourtrees... up until...

"Mommy! A kitty!"

Ebonykit tumbled under the waves of the water. Which way was up or down? Her lungs unable to wait anymore for air, she gasped, getting a mouthful of river water. she coughed and wheezed as her head appeared above the surface. "Help!" she tried to cry, but it was quieted and more like a gasp. She then disappeared under the water again.
Lionkit leaped after her, and Dustkit hurried after him. "We're coming too!" he yelped. They padded out of the bushes after their mother and heard the voice. Both kits froze mid-step.

Troutfur spotted her head before it went under and dove after her. He opened his mouth to grab her scruff and felt her tail brush against his teeth. He clamped his jaws down on it, and began to swim toward the bank.

Specklefur just collapsed. She had lost all of her strength. "She looks sick, honey," another twoleg voice said from behind the twoleg kit.

"Can I pet her?"

"No, not yet." The twoleg picked up Specklefur, who was now completely unaware of what was going on around her. "We need to take her to the vet." The twolegs went into a monster, and drove away...

Ebonykit fell limp.

 

[SilkiesForEver]

Quote: Shadowpelt nodded. "Yes Cloudshade, I'll go." he muttered, too overcome by grief to speak louder.

Quote: Dustkit wrinkled his nose in defiance, as Lionkit shot his brother a stern glare. "Yes mama." he replied. "Yes mama." Dustkit mimicked in a high pitch voice. Lionkit rolled his eyes.


Cloudshade nodded, then headed to the back of the den. She got the traveling herbs out.

Specklefur sighed with exasperation. She then realized that Ebonykit had sneaked away. "Off creating trouble again, most likely," she muttered, padding out. She felt strange.

Outside, Ebonykit was talking with Shadowkit. "Mama said we couldn't go see Troutfur today because she's not feeling well. Well, if she can't, then why don't we?"

Shadowkit nodded vigorously. "Good idea!" She bounded out of camp with Ebonykit. Shadowpelt stared at the sleeping form of Silverstripe. He sighed, licking her cheek.


Dustkit smirked, padding up behind Lionkit. He jumped at him, chewing on his ear. Lionkit snarled, flipping his brother.


Troutfur waited patiently, eager to see his mate and kits.

Silverstripe stirred, but didn't wake.

"Boys." Specklefur said sternly, though it was a bit weak. Her breaths came out raggedly. "Don't fight... I don't feel good. I don't want to handle your fights right now." She laid down, closing her eyes.

"Where's Fourtrees?" Shadowkit asked.

"We're not going to Fourtrees!" Ebonykit replied, bopping Shadowkit on the head. "Silly! Daddy's in RiverClan."

"But, mama says that we shouldn't go into other Clan's territories!" Shadowkit protested, a bit uneasy.

"Oh, so what? We're just going to see our daddy." She came to the gorge.

"We have to cross that?" Shadowkit gulped. "It looks dangerous..."

"Danger is my middle name!" Ebonykit called boldly. "Oh come on, don't be a mouse!" Grinning determinedly, she bunched her legs and jumped. "Ah!" She fell into the river. Shadowpelt waited, just staring at the silver warrior he had once been good friends with. He sighed. He missed those days.

Dustkit huffed, sitting down. Lionkit nodded, "Sorry mama." he said, nuzzling up to her. He curled up in her fur. He frowned. His mother's scent of different... kind of sour. Inwardly, he shrugged. She had probably just eaten something. Dustkit scowled at his brother and curled up by himself.

Troutfur's ears shot up. He had heard Ebonykit's scream. Leaping away towards it, he saw Shadowkit by the gorge. "Shadowkit!! What's going on?" he asked his daughter. Weakly, as if it took all of her energy to do so, she licked Lionkit's forehead, then laid it back down. She felt so fatigued.

"Ebonykit fell in the river!" Shadowkit cried, looking at Troutfur, then the river. Lionkit imediately became aware that something was wrong. "Mama! Are you okay?" He asked, his tiny voice cracking with fright.
Dustkit lifted his head. His ears drooped. "What's wrong?" He asked timidly.

Troutfur's heart skipped a beat. "Oh no." He muttered, then leaped into the river. His large semi webbed paws churned the water as he eyed the surface for his daughter.

"Yeah... I'm fine." She murmured. She suddenly remembered: Ebonykit and Shadowkit! "I-I'll be back," she said to her kits, rising to her paws. Her legs quivered, but she fought. They could be getting into any kind of trouble now. She padded out of the camp entrance; her vision was blurred. She was so dizzy, she didn't even realize she was going towards the Thunderpath instead of Fourtrees... up until...

"Mommy! A kitty!"

Ebonykit tumbled under the waves of the water. Which way was up or down? Her lungs unable to wait anymore for air, she gasped, getting a mouthful of river water. she coughed and wheezed as her head appeared above the surface. "Help!" she tried to cry, but it was quieted and more like a gasp. She then disappeared under the water again.
Lionkit leaped after her, and Dustkit hurried after him. "We're coming too!" he yelped. They padded out of the bushes after their mother and heard the voice. Both kits froze mid-step.

Troutfur spotted her head before it went under and dove after her. He opened his mouth to grab her scruff and felt her tail brush against his teeth. He clamped his jaws down on it, and began to swim toward the bank.

Specklefur just collapsed. She had lost all of her strength. "She looks sick, honey," another twoleg voice said from behind the twoleg kit.

"Can I pet her?"

"No, not yet." The twoleg picked up Specklefur, who was now completely unaware of what was going on around her. "We need to take her to the vet." The twolegs went into a monster, and drove away...

Ebonykit fell limp.
Lionkit screeched loudly, and Dustkit joined in. "MOOOOM!!!!!!" They screeched, panic rising in their chests.

Troutfur dropped on the bank, panting but licked Ebonykit frantically.

 

[OwlLover]

Quote: Shadowpelt nodded. "Yes Cloudshade, I'll go." he muttered, too overcome by grief to speak louder.

Quote: Dustkit wrinkled his nose in defiance, as Lionkit shot his brother a stern glare. "Yes mama." he replied. "Yes mama." Dustkit mimicked in a high pitch voice. Lionkit rolled his eyes.


Cloudshade nodded, then headed to the back of the den. She got the traveling herbs out.

Specklefur sighed with exasperation. She then realized that Ebonykit had sneaked away. "Off creating trouble again, most likely," she muttered, padding out. She felt strange.

Outside, Ebonykit was talking with Shadowkit. "Mama said we couldn't go see Troutfur today because she's not feeling well. Well, if she can't, then why don't we?"

Shadowkit nodded vigorously. "Good idea!" She bounded out of camp with Ebonykit. Shadowpelt stared at the sleeping form of Silverstripe. He sighed, licking her cheek.


Dustkit smirked, padding up behind Lionkit. He jumped at him, chewing on his ear. Lionkit snarled, flipping his brother.


Troutfur waited patiently, eager to see his mate and kits.

Silverstripe stirred, but didn't wake.

"Boys." Specklefur said sternly, though it was a bit weak. Her breaths came out raggedly. "Don't fight... I don't feel good. I don't want to handle your fights right now." She laid down, closing her eyes.

"Where's Fourtrees?" Shadowkit asked.

"We're not going to Fourtrees!" Ebonykit replied, bopping Shadowkit on the head. "Silly! Daddy's in RiverClan."

"But, mama says that we shouldn't go into other Clan's territories!" Shadowkit protested, a bit uneasy.

"Oh, so what? We're just going to see our daddy." She came to the gorge.

"We have to cross that?" Shadowkit gulped. "It looks dangerous..."

"Danger is my middle name!" Ebonykit called boldly. "Oh come on, don't be a mouse!" Grinning determinedly, she bunched her legs and jumped. "Ah!" She fell into the river. Shadowpelt waited, just staring at the silver warrior he had once been good friends with. He sighed. He missed those days.

Dustkit huffed, sitting down. Lionkit nodded, "Sorry mama." he said, nuzzling up to her. He curled up in her fur. He frowned. His mother's scent of different... kind of sour. Inwardly, he shrugged. She had probably just eaten something. Dustkit scowled at his brother and curled up by himself.

Troutfur's ears shot up. He had heard Ebonykit's scream. Leaping away towards it, he saw Shadowkit by the gorge. "Shadowkit!! What's going on?" he asked his daughter. Weakly, as if it took all of her energy to do so, she licked Lionkit's forehead, then laid it back down. She felt so fatigued.

"Ebonykit fell in the river!" Shadowkit cried, looking at Troutfur, then the river. Lionkit imediately became aware that something was wrong. "Mama! Are you okay?" He asked, his tiny voice cracking with fright.
Dustkit lifted his head. His ears drooped. "What's wrong?" He asked timidly.

Troutfur's heart skipped a beat. "Oh no." He muttered, then leaped into the river. His large semi webbed paws churned the water as he eyed the surface for his daughter.

"Yeah... I'm fine." She murmured. She suddenly remembered: Ebonykit and Shadowkit! "I-I'll be back," she said to her kits, rising to her paws. Her legs quivered, but she fought. They could be getting into any kind of trouble now. She padded out of the camp entrance; her vision was blurred. She was so dizzy, she didn't even realize she was going towards the Thunderpath instead of Fourtrees... up until...

"Mommy! A kitty!"

Ebonykit tumbled under the waves of the water. Which way was up or down? Her lungs unable to wait anymore for air, she gasped, getting a mouthful of river water. she coughed and wheezed as her head appeared above the surface. "Help!" she tried to cry, but it was quieted and more like a gasp. She then disappeared under the water again.
Lionkit leaped after her, and Dustkit hurried after him. "We're coming too!" he yelped. They padded out of the bushes after their mother and heard the voice. Both kits froze mid-step.

Troutfur spotted her head before it went under and dove after her. He opened his mouth to grab her scruff and felt her tail brush against his teeth. He clamped his jaws down on it, and began to swim toward the bank.

Specklefur just collapsed. She had lost all of her strength. "She looks sick, honey," another twoleg voice said from behind the twoleg kit.

"Can I pet her?"

"No, not yet." The twoleg picked up Specklefur, who was now completely unaware of what was going on around her. "We need to take her to the vet." The twolegs went into a monster, and drove away...

Ebonykit fell limp.
Lionkit screeched loudly, and Dustkit joined in. "MOOOOM!!!!!!" They screeched, panic rising in their chests.

Troutfur dropped on the bank, panting but licked Ebonykit frantically.

Ebonykit coughed, spitting up the water she had inhaled. She gasped between wheezes.

 

[OwlLover]

Later...

"Do you know what's wrong with her?" The twoleg asked as the vet came back out.

"We're running some tests, Ms. Clarksman," the vet said, "the signs aren't good. She's still unconscious from when you brought her in. She'd been sick long before you brought her in."

Ms. Clarksman frowned. "What do you think is wrong with her?" The twoleg kit clung to her mother's shirt.

"We think... that the cat you brought in has feline leukemia virus."

 

[SilkiesForEver]

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Shadowpelt's eyes narrowed. "I just can't please her, can I?" he snarled, his black tail whipping angrily. "I try to talk to her, and all she does is give me a cutting reply." he head lowered and tears formed in his eyes. "Cloudshade.. this is the first continuous conversation I've had with anyone for a long, long time." he said, his shoulders slumping. "I'm sorry." 

Cloudshade nodded in understanding. "It's not that, Shadowpelt. Like I said, she's just really deeply hurt; not physically, but emotionally. And it blinds her. She doesn't realize some of the things she says. Believe me, she hasn't just been hard on you. She can be pretty snippy with me, too. And I'm the best friend she's got and treat her as friendly as I can." She gently placed her tail confortingly on Shadowpelt's back for a second, before she sat down and curled it around her paws. "I think you should come with me to the moonstone tonight. It's the half-moon."

Shadowpelt nodded. "Yes Cloudshade, I'll go." he muttered, too overcome by grief to speak louder. 

Dustkit and Lion played outside. Dustkit was beginning to fill out, as well as his brother. But, despite the similar muscle build, their attitudes were very different. Lionkit liked playing, but once a play fight went too far--as it often did with Dustkit--he would back out politely and stop playing. Dustkit loved to play. He fought with his brother frequently, and often injured his brother in some way. Lionkit had many scars from their tussles. 

Ebonykit and Shadowkit also often play-fought, though they also turned out to be quite the explorers. They often wandered out of camp without Specklefur knowing, and Specklefur would either have to go get them, or a patrol would return with them. They often had burrs, thistles, and all kinds of scratches in their pelts for this. Specklefur shook her head, picking out a few burrs in Ebonykit's downy pelt before licking Lionkit's scars. "You two shouldn't play so roughly," she scolded, though her eyes made it obvious that she wasn't actually very upset at them.

Dustkit wrinkled his nose in defiance, as Lionkit shot his brother a stern glare. "Yes mama." he replied. "Yes mama." Dustkit mimicked in a high pitch voice. Lionkit rolled his eyes. 

Cloudshade nodded, then headed to the back of the den. She got the traveling herbs out.


Specklefur sighed with exasperation. She then realized that Ebonykit had sneaked away. "Off creating trouble again, most likely," she muttered, padding out. She felt strange.


Outside, Ebonykit was talking with Shadowkit. "Mama said we couldn't go see Troutfur today because she's not feeling well. Well, if she can't, then why don't we?"


Shadowkit nodded vigorously. "Good idea!" She bounded out of camp with Ebonykit.

Shadowpelt stared at the sleeping form of Silverstripe. He sighed, licking her cheek. 



Dustkit smirked, padding up behind Lionkit. He jumped at him, chewing on his ear. Lionkit snarled, flipping his brother. 



Troutfur waited patiently, eager to see his mate and kits. 

Silverstripe stirred, but didn't wake.


"Boys." Specklefur said sternly, though it was a bit weak. Her breaths came out raggedly. "Don't fight... I don't feel good. I don't want to handle your fights right now." She laid down, closing her eyes.


"Where's Fourtrees?" Shadowkit asked.


"We're not going to Fourtrees!" Ebonykit replied, bopping Shadowkit on the head. "Silly! Daddy's in RiverClan."


"But, mama says that we shouldn't go into other Clan's territories!" Shadowkit protested, a bit uneasy.


"Oh, so what? We're just going to see our daddy." She came to the gorge.


"We have to cross that?" Shadowkit gulped. "It looks dangerous..."


"Danger is my middle name!" Ebonykit called boldly. "Oh come on, don't be a mouse!" Grinning determinedly, she bunched her legs and jumped. "Ah!" She fell into the river.

[/quote]
Shadowpelt waited, just staring at the silver warrior he had once been good friends with. He sighed. He missed those days. 


Dustkit huffed, sitting down. Lionkit nodded, "Sorry mama." he said, nuzzling up to her. He curled up in her fur. He frowned. His mother's scent of different... kind of sour. Inwardly, he shrugged. She had probably just eaten something. Dustkit scowled at his brother and curled up by himself. 


Troutfur's ears shot up. He had heard Ebonykit's scream. Leaping away towards it, he saw Shadowkit by the gorge. "Shadowkit!! What's going on?" he asked his daughter. [/quote]
Weakly, as if it took all of her energy to do so, she licked Lionkit's forehead, then laid it back down. She felt so fatigued.


"Ebonykit fell in the river!" Shadowkit cried, looking at Troutfur, then the river.[/quote]
Lionkit imediately became aware that something was wrong. "Mama! Are you okay?" He asked, his tiny voice cracking with fright.

Dustkit lifted his head. His ears drooped. "What's wrong?" He asked timidly.


Troutfur's heart skipped a beat. "Oh no." He muttered, then leaped into the river. His large semi webbed paws churned the water as he eyed the surface for his daughter.[/quote]


"Yeah... I'm fine." She murmured. She suddenly remembered: Ebonykit and Shadowkit! "I-I'll be back," she said to her kits, rising to her paws. Her legs quivered, but she fought. They could be getting into any kind of trouble now. She padded out of the camp entrance; her vision was blurred. She was so dizzy, she didn't even realize she was going towards the Thunderpath instead of Fourtrees... up until...

"Mommy! A kitty!"

Ebonykit tumbled under the waves of the water. Which way was up or down? Her lungs unable to wait anymore for air, she gasped, getting a mouthful of river water. she coughed and wheezed as her head appeared above the surface. "Help!" she tried to cry, but it was quieted and more like a gasp. She then disappeared under the water again.
[/quote]
Lionkit leaped after her, and Dustkit hurried after him. "We're coming too!" he yelped. They padded out of the bushes after their mother and heard the voice. Both kits froze mid-step. 

Troutfur spotted her head before it went under and dove after her. He opened his mouth to grab her scruff and felt her tail brush against his teeth. He clamped his jaws down on it, and began to swim toward the bank. 
[/quote]


Specklefur just collapsed. She had lost all of her strength. "She looks sick, honey," another twoleg voice said from behind the twoleg kit.

"Can I pet her?"

"No, not yet." The twoleg picked up Specklefur, who was now completely unaware of what was going on around her. "We need to take her to the vet." The twolegs went into a monster, and drove away...

Ebonykit fell limp.
[/quote]
Lionkit screeched loudly, and Dustkit joined in. "MOOOOM!!!!!!" They screeched, panic rising in their chests. 

Troutfur dropped on the bank, panting but licked Ebonykit frantically. 
[/quote]


Ebonykit coughed, spitting up the water she had inhaled. She gasped between wheezes.
[/quote]
Trout fur stumbled back, hitting the ground with a thud. Fright and the adrenaline rush had left him exhausted. "Ebonykit?" He meowed.

 

[OwlLover]

Quote: Shadowpelt nodded. "Yes Cloudshade, I'll go." he muttered, too overcome by grief to speak louder.

Quote: Dustkit wrinkled his nose in defiance, as Lionkit shot his brother a stern glare. "Yes mama." he replied. "Yes mama." Dustkit mimicked in a high pitch voice. Lionkit rolled his eyes.



Cloudshade nodded, then headed to the back of the den. She got the traveling herbs out.


Specklefur sighed with exasperation. She then realized that Ebonykit had sneaked away. "Off creating trouble again, most likely," she muttered, padding out. She felt strange.


Outside, Ebonykit was talking with Shadowkit. "Mama said we couldn't go see Troutfur today because she's not feeling well. Well, if she can't, then why don't we?"


Shadowkit nodded vigorously. "Good idea!" She bounded out of camp with Ebonykit. Shadowpelt stared at the sleeping form of Silverstripe. He sighed, licking her cheek.



Dustkit smirked, padding up behind Lionkit. He jumped at him, chewing on his ear. Lionkit snarled, flipping his brother.



Troutfur waited patiently, eager to see his mate and kits.


Silverstripe stirred, but didn't wake.


"Boys." Specklefur said sternly, though it was a bit weak. Her breaths came out raggedly. "Don't fight... I don't feel good. I don't want to handle your fights right now." She laid down, closing her eyes.


"Where's Fourtrees?" Shadowkit asked.


"We're not going to Fourtrees!" Ebonykit replied, bopping Shadowkit on the head. "Silly! Daddy's in RiverClan."


"But, mama says that we shouldn't go into other Clan's territories!" Shadowkit protested, a bit uneasy.


"Oh, so what? We're just going to see our daddy." She came to the gorge.


"We have to cross that?" Shadowkit gulped. "It looks dangerous..."


"Danger is my middle name!" Ebonykit called boldly. "Oh come on, don't be a mouse!" Grinning determinedly, she bunched her legs and jumped. "Ah!" She fell into the river. Shadowpelt waited, just staring at the silver warrior he had once been good friends with. He sighed. He missed those days.


Dustkit huffed, sitting down. Lionkit nodded, "Sorry mama." he said, nuzzling up to her. He curled up in her fur. He frowned. His mother's scent of different... kind of sour. Inwardly, he shrugged. She had probably just eaten something. Dustkit scowled at his brother and curled up by himself.


Troutfur's ears shot up. He had heard Ebonykit's scream. Leaping away towards it, he saw Shadowkit by the gorge. "Shadowkit!! What's going on?" he asked his daughter. Weakly, as if it took all of her energy to do so, she licked Lionkit's forehead, then laid it back down. She felt so fatigued.


"Ebonykit fell in the river!" Shadowkit cried, looking at Troutfur, then the river. Lionkit imediately became aware that something was wrong. "Mama! Are you okay?" He asked, his tiny voice cracking with fright.

Dustkit lifted his head. His ears drooped. "What's wrong?" He asked timidly.


Troutfur's heart skipped a beat. "Oh no." He muttered, then leaped into the river. His large semi webbed paws churned the water as he eyed the surface for his daughter.

"Yeah... I'm fine." She murmured. She suddenly remembered: Ebonykit and Shadowkit! "I-I'll be back," she said to her kits, rising to her paws. Her legs quivered, but she fought. They could be getting into any kind of trouble now. She padded out of the camp entrance; her vision was blurred. She was so dizzy, she didn't even realize she was going towards the Thunderpath instead of Fourtrees... up until...

"Mommy! A kitty!"

Ebonykit tumbled under the waves of the water. Which way was up or down? Her lungs unable to wait anymore for air, she gasped, getting a mouthful of river water. she coughed and wheezed as her head appeared above the surface. "Help!" she tried to cry, but it was quieted and more like a gasp. She then disappeared under the water again. Lionkit leaped after her, and Dustkit hurried after him. "We're coming too!" he yelped. They padded out of the bushes after their mother and heard the voice. Both kits froze mid-step.

Troutfur spotted her head before it went under and dove after her. He opened his mouth to grab her scruff and felt her tail brush against his teeth. He clamped his jaws down on it, and began to swim toward the bank.

Specklefur just collapsed. She had lost all of her strength. "She looks sick, honey," another twoleg voice said from behind the twoleg kit.

"Can I pet her?"

"No, not yet." The twoleg picked up Specklefur, who was now completely unaware of what was going on around her. "We need to take her to the vet." The twolegs went into a monster, and drove away...

Ebonykit fell limp. Lionkit screeched loudly, and Dustkit joined in. "MOOOOM!!!!!!" They screeched, panic rising in their chests.

Troutfur dropped on the bank, panting but licked Ebonykit frantically.

Ebonykit coughed, spitting up the water she had inhaled. She gasped between wheezes. Trout fur stumbled back, hitting the ground with a thud. Fright and the adrenaline rush had left him exhausted. "Ebonykit?" He meowed.
Ebonykit looked up weakly. "Daddy?"

 

[Perfect Polish]

Yay Bearkit said happily. He ran to his sisters. Were going to be apprentices tonight he said.

 

[awesome308]

Name: Bramblekit
Clan: none, loners
Family: (Includes mate and kits) sister, Sandkit
Gender: Male
Other: His father was a kittypet, his mother was a loner. Him and his sister didn't see their father often. Their mother was killed by a rogue cat. They have been by themselves ever since.
Rank: Loner
Picture or Description:

Username: awesome308


Name: Sandkit
Clan: Loner
Family: (Includes mate and kits) brother, Bramblekit
Gender: Female
Other: Same as above
Rank: Loner
Picture or Description:

Username: awesome308