~Water Striding~ A kelpie roleplay

Is this a good RP?

  • Yus

    Votes: 4 66.7%

  • Nah

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • It's ok

    Votes: 2 33.3%
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PerfectPlumage said:
Sirius suddenly gave a furious roar and leaped out of the water onto Clive. Jinx joined in, and Minerva helped them try to push him into the water.
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Striker was startled and transformed into her kelpie form and growled and snarled "Stop!!!" She screeched. Clive tried pulling away, he began geting cut up from their fangs. Striker ripped Jinx off, growling at her then kicked at Minerva. She bit Sirius in the neck, her eyes turned red as she tried to protect Clive. She managed to get Clive out of the jumble of Kelpies and pushed him away. Clive was weak from the blood loss but he tried to run as fast as he could.
 
ducky 13 said:
Striker was startled and transformed into her kelpie form and growled and snarled "Stop!!!" She screeched. Clive tried pulling away, he began geting cut up from their fangs. Striker ripped Jinx off, growling at her then kicked at Minerva. She bit Sirius in the neck, her eyes turned red as she tried to protect Clive. She managed to get Clive out of the jumble of Kelpies and pushed him away. Clive was weak from the blood loss but he tried to run as fast as he could.
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Jinx hissed and chased after them, she being the least injured. She was gaining on Clive. She panted, baring her hideously long fangs. Lily's small hoof steps could be heard behind Jinx. "LILY! GO!" Yelled Jinx as the tiny kelpie foal latched her jaws into Clive's back leg. (Lily wants to help she's too adorable xD)
 
PerfectPlumage said:
Jinx hissed and chased after them, she being the least injured. She was gaining on Clive. She panted, baring her hideously long fangs. Lily's small hoof steps could be heard behind Jinx. "LILY! GO!" Yelled Jinx as the tiny kelpie foal latched her jaws into Clive's back leg. (Lily wants to help she's too adorable xD)
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Clive winnied in pain, but he continued to run with the foal latched onto him. Striker slowed down a bit and kicked at the foal then finally reached back and grabbed the foals neck as she galloped, slowly suffocating the foal as she ran until the foal was knocked out then dropping her and jumping over her. (I couldn't kill her)
Clive ran faster and faster until he reached the stable. By then striker was feeling low on water but stood guard. (The foal is knocked out not dead, from the lack of oxygen.)
 
ducky 13 said:
Clive winnied in pain, but he continued to run with the foal latched onto him. Striker slowed down a bit and kicked at the foal then finally reached back and grabbed the foals neck as she galloped, slowly suffocating the foal as she ran until the foal was knocked out then dropping her and jumping over her. (I couldn't kill her)
Clive ran faster and faster until he reached the stable. By then striker was feeling low on water but stood guard. (The foal is knocked out not dead, from the lack of oxygen.)
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(I know) "Lily!" Screamed Jinx and she stopped the chase and placed Lily on her back and shot back to the others. She placed Lily on the ground, Minerva ran over with a gasp. "LILY!" Minerva sat down in front of her foal and tried to wake her up. Jinx went to get some seaweed for bandages for the injuries of the herd.
 
PerfectPlumage said:
(I know) "Lily!" Screamed Jinx and she stopped the chase and placed Lily on her back and shot back to the others. She placed Lily on the ground, Minerva ran over with a gasp. "LILY!" Minerva sat down in front of her foal and tried to wake her up. Jinx went to get some seaweed for bandages for the injuries of the herd.
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(Just making sure you knew :))

Striker painted as she stood in front of the stable and Clive lay behind it resting his injured legs. Striker began to get a bit dizzy, running had her lose a lot of water that she needed. She needed to get back to the lake, but she couldn't leave Clive behind, to fend for himself. He was injured and she had to protect him.
 

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