We will miss you Deerman

A poem of mine revised for Deerman,a good friend and mentor with wisdom I will not forget.


I've Ran Out Of Tears

by Gabriel Mendoza


Growing up I have ran out of tears.
I have ran out because of so many fears
All my loved ones dying within those years
I can hear them all,still voices ringing in my ears

They have passed on,no more pain they are in
This world was enough,then end..fin
to paradise or heaven they did win
then end of all things,of flesh,of grief,of sin

I often wonder when would be my turn
to leave this place,to began a new learn
or come back here to live again,to return
to live this life again,in agony and burn

I lost a friend today but I didn't cry
He was so friendly,but he did die
Its a little lonelier in this place
But no tear has rolled off my face
Goodbye Deerman, you I'll never replace
And your name I'll never erase
And where you will go you will fly
Look,there are tears


.............................................I did cry.


R.I.P. DEERMAN
Me too! That is aw some thank you for taking the time to write this and share it.
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As I am now. Tears rolling down my cheeks. Thanks for the beautiful poem. Does anyone know how old Deerman was?
Thank you for those kind words on Deermans poem. As a writer,his wisdom will live on my quill and his words in my inkwell.

Byc members never leave,they just Fly On.
 
I just saw this as I dont venture off much anymore to read beyond threads Im involved with...The tears were instant and I will surely miss such a wonderful man..We love you much Deerman!!! What a huge loss for all!
 

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