WingClan, a Chicken clan ЯР--> 'Fly with the breeze'

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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She stood quietly, proudly and watched the others. What if they won't let me join? she wondered. No, it can't happen again! she thought. She felt sick. Her mind raced as she remembered again why . . . No she forced down the memories and composed herself.

"Something the matter?" Cometflight asked as he tilted his head slightly, being his nosy, but caring self. Patchwork shot him an intent glance; trying to tell him that it wasn't his business.

"no" she said shaking her head vigorously. They can't know! How could they? It was long ago and far away she thought. Her knees started to shake slightly.

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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You were .

Prolly my internet status fluctuating again...

It says your on now.

 

[BirdNut]

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"Something the matter?" Cometflight asked as he tilted his head slightly, being his nosy, but caring self. Patchwork shot him an intent glance; trying to tell him that it wasn't his business.

"no" she said shaking her head vigorously. They can't know! How could they? It was long ago and far away she thought. Her knees started to shake slightly.

Cometflight wore a coy grin and looked away, trying his best not to prod further. Patchwork, though unknowing of what the problem was, briskly narrowed his eyes at her as he continued on.

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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"no" she said shaking her head vigorously. They can't know! How could they? It was long ago and far away she thought. Her knees started to shake slightly.

Cometflight wore a coy grin and looked away, trying his best not to prod further. Patchwork, though unknowing of what the problem was, briskly narrowed his eyes at her as he continued on.

She composed herself and followed after him. She stared at the guard and frowned nosy she thought. Her mulitcolored body of orange, black, and brown stood out among the forest.She was all-together an odd figure, having no tail and strange tufts. She wondered what they must think of her.

 

[The Turken Lady]

 

[ChickieBooBoo]

Turken do you want to say that both Cherrypaw and Deathstorm were knocked unconcious, that way niether of them die

 

[The Turken Lady]

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( Yeah. That's what I wrote a few pages back - )

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Do you just want to say that they are both unconcious?

( Okay.

Sorry I poofed last night.

I hate my internet connection sometimes. )

Deathstorm growled,then released his grip on Cherrypaw's neck,sending her falling to the ground. He laughed the best he could,lack of oxygen starting to take effect. Without warning,his eyes rolled to the back of his head and he fell,hitting the ground with a loud Thud. It echoed around the empty forest,causing Nightwhisper to nearly jump out of his skin. "Erm," He started,looking around warily. "What was that?"

 

[ChickieBooBoo]

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( Yeah. That's what I wrote a few pages back - )

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( Okay.

Sorry I poofed last night.

I hate my internet connection sometimes. )

Deathstorm growled,then released his grip on Cherrypaw's neck,sending her falling to the ground. He laughed the best he could,lack of oxygen starting to take effect. Without warning,his eyes rolled to the back of his head and he fell,hitting the ground with a loud Thud. It echoed around the empty forest,causing Nightwhisper to nearly jump out of his skin. "Erm," He started,looking around warily. "What was that?"


(oh sorry, I didn't see it)

Cherrypaw awoke with a moan, moving her aching neck in slow circles. She got unsteadily to her feet, frowning at Deathstorm and tottered off into the trees.

 

[The Turken Lady]

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( Yeah. That's what I wrote a few pages back - )

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(oh sorry, I didn't see it)

Cherrypaw awoke with a moan, moving her aching neck in slow circles. She got unsteadily to her feet, frowning at Deathstorm and tottered off into the trees.

( It's okay. )

Deathstorm still lay unconscious,his breathing shallow. Blood trickled from his mouth and onto his feathers,staining them crimson. The large,gaping wound on his stomach was bleeding heavily,forming a pool of blood beside him.

 

[ChickieBooBoo]

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( Yeah. That's what I wrote a few pages back - )



(oh sorry, I didn't see it)

Cherrypaw awoke with a moan, moving her aching neck in slow circles. She got unsteadily to her feet, frowning at Deathstorm and tottered off into the trees.

( It's okay. )

Deathstorm still lay unconscious,his breathing shallow. Blood trickled from his mouth and onto his feathers,staining them crimson. The large,gaping wound on his stomach was bleeding heavily,forming a pool of blood beside him.

A large, black shape watched from the shadows of a bush. His beak curved into a smile as he said to Cherrypaw "You have done well, my young apprentice"