Finished my first page, & would like some input (good or bad) as to what you think. The other pages are coming along slowly, but I'd like opinions on my home page. I still have to add email link to it. Just wondering if it's to wordy, should I condense it?
Is my banner ok, should I maybe have products I'm selling in it? I want my home page to be simple yet compelling enough for people to want to check out the product pages. OK, let me have it, I have my teflon helmet on...lol
*Edited to fix link
http://lcrt.weebly.com/
Is my banner ok, should I maybe have products I'm selling in it? I want my home page to be simple yet compelling enough for people to want to check out the product pages. OK, let me have it, I have my teflon helmet on...lol

*Edited to fix link
http://lcrt.weebly.com/
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