Writing goals

[RDchicken99]

I MADE THEM FORCIBLY TAKE THEM OFF ALTAIR WHILE HE WAS PLEADING NO BUT THEY DIDNT LISTEN AND NOW WHAT HE REMEMBERS HIS DAD BY IS GONE

BRILLIANT.

I hate myself for letting this happen

That's how you know you've done well.

 

[Isabella7Storm5]

Me writing the kids dialogue: “…And then i was *autocorrect changes my misspelling of ‘awake’ to ‘dead’
Me: WOAH. Wait a sec we’re getting ahead of ourselves now

 

[Isabella7Storm5]

That's how you know you've done well.

This is pain
Uuuhhhggggg

Idk, maybe Arne can grab them when he goes on an ancestral field trip

BRILLIANT

It was lowkey beautiful

 

[Lacy Duckwing]

BRILLIANT.

That's how you know you've done well.

Writing mistakes that somehow turn to perfection.

Honestly, I can't stand it when that happens either. Maybe I should try leaving it next time instead of trying to fix it, or pretending it never happened.

 

[Isabella7Storm5]

or pretending it never happened.

My predicament is that Arne HAS to take them off Altair’s corpse
So buddy’s gotta get them back at some point

 

[Somewhere_In_The_Clouds]

Me writing the kids dialogue: “…And then i was *autocorrect changes my misspelling of ‘awake’ to ‘dead’
Me: WOAH. Wait a sec we’re getting ahead of ourselves now

I can't believe you're gonna kill her.

My predicament is that Arne HAS to take them off Altair’s corpse

sentences I never wanna read again

 

[Isabella7Storm5]

I can't believe you're gonna kill her.

I was feeling a smol bit bad just now because of her telling him that she would call for him in her dreams because she was scared and would hear his voice but he never came

 

[Lacy Duckwing]

My predicament is that Arne HAS to take them off Altair’s corpse
So buddy’s gotta get them back at some point

Usually what sums up my cases, though maybe not the corpse part. Then it's hard, because making a whole side trip to rescue something that might be mildly unimportant just for an important scene...

But that's where @RDchicken99 is pointing to brilliance. They are important. Things just got complicated because now he has to go back to get these things that reminds him of his father, risking getting in the same trap or worse that he was in previously, and now everyone is biting their nails off their fingers worried that he might get caught, and that he might not be able to get them back again.

 

[Somewhere_In_The_Clouds]

I was feeling a smol bit bad just now because of her telling him that she would call for him in her dreams because she was scared and would hear his voice but he never came

 

[Isabella7Storm5]

It’s okay clouds…she wont ever really…die…nah wait nevermind…oh shoot…
No its not okay