I liked your article and the pictures were nice, but make sure to fix grammatical errors and go into a little more detail. Maybe include a 'daily checklist' on what you do every day to care for your pekins.
Good article, but I feel there are more topics to cover, along with editing grammatical errors.
Anonymous
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There is good information in the article, but there are a lot of spelling errors that need to be fixed. Going more in-depth into some of the topics covered would also be good.
Anonymous
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Needs editing, more topics could be covered.
I did find certain parts to be somewhat informative.
