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[canada-goose]

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I'm not book critic material, you know. Really.

Aw, come one. You critiqued Cinderella & Cinderella for me once.

*Posted for Crazy's benefit because he can't read the PM I sent you*

Pretty good! I must say that the roleplay doesn't really lend itself to book form, though. It kind of... seems too chatty, I guess. It might be improved if you took more artistic license with the story.

 

[eenie114]

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This is my 1st time writing with someone else. I usually work alone, but I wanted Crazy to write something, because I think he'd enjoy it and has the talent.

Yeah, he does, he's a good writer when he wants to be

I've tried my hand at lots of writing, I've written four movies and come up with about three other ideas I haven't written yet...

Woah, you wrote a screenplay?

Awesome.

I'm best a short stories, but I'm forcng myself to do a novel, or at least a novella.

 

[eenie114]

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Aw, come one. You critiqued Cinderella & Cinderella for me once.

*Posted for Crazy's benefit because he can't read the PM I sent you*

Pretty good! I must say that the roleplay doesn't really lend itself to book form, though. It kind of... seems too chatty, I guess. It might be improved if you took more artistic license with the story.

Yeah, that's what I thought. But this is just a first draft. So, you don't mind if we take the idea and run with it a little?

 

[Delta2 23]

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Yeah, he does, he's a good writer when he wants to be

I've tried my hand at lots of writing, I've written four movies and come up with about three other ideas I haven't written yet...

Woah, you wrote a screenplay?

Awesome.

I'm best a short stories, but I'm forcng myself to do a novel, or at least a novella.

I think I prefer movies, because I'm good at the ideas and the talk, but not the long flowery descriptions. Sometimes I do put a little novel stuff into them though, which I shouldn't but I write it down anyway lest I forget

 

[canada-goose]

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*Posted for Crazy's benefit because he can't read the PM I sent you*

Pretty good! I must say that the roleplay doesn't really lend itself to book form, though. It kind of... seems too chatty, I guess. It might be improved if you took more artistic license with the story.

Yeah, that's what I thought. But this is just a first draft. So, you don't mind if we take the idea and run with it a little?

Play with it as much as you want. I don't mind.

 

[crazyaboutchickens]

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Aw, come one. You critiqued Cinderella & Cinderella for me once.

*Posted for Crazy's benefit because he can't read the PM I sent you*

Pretty good! I must say that the roleplay doesn't really lend itself to book form, though. It kind of... seems too chatty, I guess. It might be improved if you took more artistic license with the story.

*hmm thinks about it*

 

[eenie114]

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Woah, you wrote a screenplay?

Awesome.

I'm best a short stories, but I'm forcng myself to do a novel, or at least a novella.

I think I prefer movies, because I'm good at the ideas and the talk, but not the long flowery descriptions. Sometimes I do put a little novel stuff into them though, which I shouldn't but I write it down anyway lest I forget

Long flowery descriptions usually make me gag.

I try to avoid them. But then I worry that there's not enough description, and so on and so forth.

 

[Delta2 23]

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I think I prefer movies, because I'm good at the ideas and the talk, but not the long flowery descriptions. Sometimes I do put a little novel stuff into them though, which I shouldn't but I write it down anyway lest I forget

Long flowery descriptions usually make me gag.

I try to avoid them. But then I worry that there's not enough description, and so on and so forth.

I'm all right with them, but I prefer to get things moving. My longest movie's only 18 pages on word processing, but it's very confusing. I almost cried at the end when writing it. It's very sweet...

I tried my hand at writing other stuff on the clan chat thread, a story about a few of my chicken characters. I think they're okay.

 

[eenie114]

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Long flowery descriptions usually make me gag.

I try to avoid them. But then I worry that there's not enough description, and so on and so forth.

I'm all right with them, but I prefer to get things moving. My longest movie's only 18 pages on word processing, but it's very confusing. I almost cried at the end when writing it. It's very sweet...

I tried my hand at writing other stuff on the clan chat thread, a story about a few of my chicken characters. I think they're okay.

My longest is 34, currently.

It's like a quarter of the way done.

 

[Delta2 23]

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I'm all right with them, but I prefer to get things moving. My longest movie's only 18 pages on word processing, but it's very confusing. I almost cried at the end when writing it. It's very sweet...

I tried my hand at writing other stuff on the clan chat thread, a story about a few of my chicken characters. I think they're okay.

My longest is 34, currently.

It's like a quarter of the way done.

You write movies too? Or is this a story?
I think if I wrote the movies out they'd be longer. I wrote about a page of one as a novel for an english assignment, and it turned out considerably longer.