Aw, come one. You critiqued Cinderella & Cinderella for me once.
*Posted for Crazy's benefit because he can't read the PM I sent you*
Pretty good! I must say that the roleplay doesn't really lend itself to book form, though. It kind of... seems too chatty, I guess. It might be improved if you took more artistic license with the story.
This is my 1st time writing with someone else. I usually work alone, but I wanted Crazy to write something, because I think he'd enjoy it and has the talent.
Yeah, he does, he's a good writer when he wants to be
I've tried my hand at lots of writing, I've written four movies and come up with about three other ideas I haven't written yet...
Woah, you wrote a screenplay?
Awesome.
I'm best a short stories, but I'm forcng myself to do a novel, or at least a novella.
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Aw, come one. You critiqued Cinderella & Cinderella for me once.
*Posted for Crazy's benefit because he can't read the PM I sent you*
Pretty good! I must say that the roleplay doesn't really lend itself to book form, though. It kind of... seems too chatty, I guess. It might be improved if you took more artistic license with the story.
Yeah, that's what I thought. But this is just a first draft. So, you don't mind if we take the idea and run with it a little?
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Yeah, he does, he's a good writer when he wants to be
I've tried my hand at lots of writing, I've written four movies and come up with about three other ideas I haven't written yet...
Woah, you wrote a screenplay?
Awesome.
I'm best a short stories, but I'm forcng myself to do a novel, or at least a novella.
I think I prefer movies, because I'm good at the ideas and the talk, but not the long flowery descriptions. Sometimes I do put a little novel stuff into them though, which I shouldn't but I write it down anyway lest I forget
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*Posted for Crazy's benefit because he can't read the PM I sent you*
Pretty good! I must say that the roleplay doesn't really lend itself to book form, though. It kind of... seems too chatty, I guess. It might be improved if you took more artistic license with the story.
Yeah, that's what I thought. But this is just a first draft. So, you don't mind if we take the idea and run with it a little?
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Aw, come one. You critiqued Cinderella & Cinderella for me once.
*Posted for Crazy's benefit because he can't read the PM I sent you*
Pretty good! I must say that the roleplay doesn't really lend itself to book form, though. It kind of... seems too chatty, I guess. It might be improved if you took more artistic license with the story.
I'm best a short stories, but I'm forcng myself to do a novel, or at least a novella.
I think I prefer movies, because I'm good at the ideas and the talk, but not the long flowery descriptions. Sometimes I do put a little novel stuff into them though, which I shouldn't but I write it down anyway lest I forget
Long flowery descriptions usually make me gag.
I try to avoid them. But then I worry that there's not enough description, and so on and so forth.
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I think I prefer movies, because I'm good at the ideas and the talk, but not the long flowery descriptions. Sometimes I do put a little novel stuff into them though, which I shouldn't but I write it down anyway lest I forget
Long flowery descriptions usually make me gag.
I try to avoid them. But then I worry that there's not enough description, and so on and so forth.
I'm all right with them, but I prefer to get things moving. My longest movie's only 18 pages on word processing, but it's very confusing. I almost cried at the end when writing it. It's very sweet...
I tried my hand at writing other stuff on the clan chat thread, a story about a few of my chicken characters. I think they're okay.
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Long flowery descriptions usually make me gag.
I try to avoid them. But then I worry that there's not enough description, and so on and so forth.
I'm all right with them, but I prefer to get things moving. My longest movie's only 18 pages on word processing, but it's very confusing. I almost cried at the end when writing it. It's very sweet...
I tried my hand at writing other stuff on the clan chat thread, a story about a few of my chicken characters. I think they're okay.
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I'm all right with them, but I prefer to get things moving. My longest movie's only 18 pages on word processing, but it's very confusing. I almost cried at the end when writing it. It's very sweet...
I tried my hand at writing other stuff on the clan chat thread, a story about a few of my chicken characters. I think they're okay.
My longest is 34, currently.
It's like a quarter of the way done.
You write movies too? Or is this a story?
I think if I wrote the movies out they'd be longer. I wrote about a page of one as a novel for an english assignment, and it turned out considerably longer.
I'm not book critic material, you know. Really.
