(Ok, now I realize most people have a day job... I have 4 kids IRL i'm a stay at home mom... so the fact that I stayed up all night stressing about this shouldnt be a terribly huge surprise. or at the very least I hope you guys don't think I'm a serious weirdo... lol on that note I would like to change my earlier post:
Now that she was safe at the train station Tayns thoughts began to race.
what was the Evidence that the guy in apt.219 was the one that had kidnapped the girl?
The neighbor said it was him. - The Neighbor was creepy, and could just be pointing fingers to move the blame from him. Also the girl was on a completely different floor. why would the neighbor say the crying was coming from next door?
there was a stain in the carpet outside his door. we assumed it was blood. - if it was blood it could have been put there by someone else.... like the creepy neighbor.
He took a shot at Gage. - it was midnight and there was a winged guy, a wolf girl brandishing a sword and a crow on his balcony.
who locks all of their doors even the ones inside their apt.? - kinda weird doesn't make a person guilty of a crime.
He threatened to call his lawyer instead of using his shadow controlling powers on 2 angry wolf girls who were arguing over who would get to be the one to kill him.
he was uncooperative about opening his locked door. - there wasn't anything necessarily incriminating in there though, we just assumed.
He didn't turn nasty until Farren decided to "Play" all his actions could have been made in self defense... sure he might have enjoyed it, but again that doesnt mean he was the one who kidnapped the girl.
"his buddys" showed up the second he died. - when did he have a chance to call for backup?
the thugs were shooting up the place when no one was there to be shot at in the hallway or stairwell with them. - seems like they were trying to get our group to leave without a fight.
Evidence that apt.219 was the one that kidnapped the girl = NONE!!!
Tayn looked around at everyone that had made it to the train station, how, many? there were 6 missing. And Farren was hurt. Gage had blood all over him. Her heart was pounding in her ears and she couldn't seem to get enough air. Tayn stood up and staggered away from the group. she only got a few steps before blacking out in the snow.
(I'm not saying it wasnt him, just my characters POV)
Now that she was safe at the train station Tayns thoughts began to race.
what was the Evidence that the guy in apt.219 was the one that had kidnapped the girl?
The neighbor said it was him. - The Neighbor was creepy, and could just be pointing fingers to move the blame from him. Also the girl was on a completely different floor. why would the neighbor say the crying was coming from next door?
there was a stain in the carpet outside his door. we assumed it was blood. - if it was blood it could have been put there by someone else.... like the creepy neighbor.
He took a shot at Gage. - it was midnight and there was a winged guy, a wolf girl brandishing a sword and a crow on his balcony.
who locks all of their doors even the ones inside their apt.? - kinda weird doesn't make a person guilty of a crime.
He threatened to call his lawyer instead of using his shadow controlling powers on 2 angry wolf girls who were arguing over who would get to be the one to kill him.
he was uncooperative about opening his locked door. - there wasn't anything necessarily incriminating in there though, we just assumed.
He didn't turn nasty until Farren decided to "Play" all his actions could have been made in self defense... sure he might have enjoyed it, but again that doesnt mean he was the one who kidnapped the girl.
"his buddys" showed up the second he died. - when did he have a chance to call for backup?
the thugs were shooting up the place when no one was there to be shot at in the hallway or stairwell with them. - seems like they were trying to get our group to leave without a fight.
Evidence that apt.219 was the one that kidnapped the girl = NONE!!!
Tayn looked around at everyone that had made it to the train station, how, many? there were 6 missing. And Farren was hurt. Gage had blood all over him. Her heart was pounding in her ears and she couldn't seem to get enough air. Tayn stood up and staggered away from the group. she only got a few steps before blacking out in the snow.
(I'm not saying it wasnt him, just my characters POV)
gg Laodicia gg. gg means good game for those who dont know 
)
