ஜ~~Mirror, Mirror on the Wall RP~~ஜ ((UPDATES))

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Snow looked around at the camp. At her camp. These men fought and died for her. She smiled at one of them as they walked up and said "Hail, Snow White." The hard not in her stomach tightened with determination and eagerness. 5 weeks was to long to wait. She wanted to kill the back-stabbing wretch who sat on her fathers throne. She hated her with every fiber of her being. It was with this realization that she knew she was changing. Not by much but soon she would be killing men to get herself closer to the primary goal; the Queen. She would stab that traitor 3 times in the chest, as she had her father. Once to kill, once for her father, and once for herself. Her face hardened. She knew then she had lost part of her innocence with these thoughts. She strode off into the forest to find peace of mind with her beloved animals, her black hair swinging and her lips parted slightly
 
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Snow looked around at the camp. At her camp. These men fought and died for her. She smiled at one of them as they walked up and said "Hail, Snow White." The hard not in her stomach tightened with determination and eagerness. 5 weeks was to long to wait. She wanted to kill the back-stabbing wretch who sat on her fathers throne. She hated her with every fiber of her being. It was with this realization that she knew she was changing. Not by much but soon she would be killing men to get herself closer to the primary goal; the Queen. She would stab that traitor 3 times in the chest, as she had her father. Once to kill, once for her father, and once for herself. Her face hardened. She knew then she had lost part of her innocence with these thoughts. She strode off into the forest to find peace of mind with her beloved animals, her black hair swinging and her lips parted slightly
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Icis.

There she sat. Her hair hid her face, falling over the sides of her pale, ashen face like long black drapes. She lifted her gaze, staring blankly ahead. She listened to the screaming wind, slapping her face and stinging her ears. The darkening sky was empty, lacking stars and its moon, a mere black ocean. Icis' eyes were seemingly malign, soul-diminishing. Malevolent and satanic. Just sitting there, she was a recipie for disastor. She parted her lips and uttered only two little words:
"Sweet revenge."

(( OH GOD. XD I can just hear the song 'Our Solemn Hour' in my head for Icis. Except 'Our Solemn Hour' is MY theme song. XD So is 'Dance With the Devil'. :3 I'm not religious, but GOD, how I love 'Our Solemn Hour'. Even though they say 'Holy Spirit' in Latin, it's still my theme song. Even though I'm not religious. XD Okay, I'm done rambling. ))
 
Snow walked through the forest listening to the singing of the birds. She came upon Icis. "Hello?" she called, concerned. "Are you ok?" She noticed how beautifully dangerous the girl looked. She walked towards her wondering what she was doing. She then, barely, heard two words whispered on the wind. "Sweet revenge," Snow whispered wonderingly. She then became a little bit scared and loosened her sword, Frost, in its sheath.

((O my god!!I listened to it while reading what you just wrote and it made it soo intense!!! LOVE IT<3<3<3!!!!))
 
(( XD GOD DO I EVER LOVE THAT SONG. It's my 1st of 3 theme songs. The only thing I despise of it is that they put 'Sanctus Espiritus', which is Latin for 'Holy Spirit'. I pay little attention to that, because I'm atheist, but whatever. Deal. It's an epic song. :3 ))

Icis didn't move otherwise, but she lifted her green gaze to Snow.
 

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