₸hḕ Nigh₮ Mờves - A Fantasy RP

What do you think of the story line?

  • Way too long, this is getting out of hand.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Fun to read!

    Votes: 5 62.5%
  • Creepy.

    Votes: 3 37.5%
  • ...Meh. You kinda wasted a few hours of your time.

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    8
Alton came to and abrupt halt and stood completely still, not even breathing. He listend throughout the forest listening for the girl but all he heard was the wind gently swaying the leaves on the trees. He closed his eyes and listend more intently but still he heard nothing. Beneath his silver mask a small smile spread acrossed his face "she is a tricky one" he thought to himself. He jumped up into the trees thinking he would have a better view from above than on the ground
 
Alton came to and abrupt halt and stood completely still, not even breathing. He listend throughout the forest listening for the girl but all he heard was the wind gently swaying the leaves on the trees. He closed his eyes and listend more intently but still he heard nothing. Beneath his silver mask a small smile spread acrossed his face "she is a tricky one" he thought to himself. He jumped up into the trees thinking he would have a better view from above than on the ground
Imra froze completely, holding tightly onto her branch when Alton jumped into a tree. She waited with bated breath, wondering if Alton would find her or not. She tapped her fingers on the tree bark impatiently as she waited.
 
( I have to go to bed now
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I hope the suspense doesn't kill you )
(LOL, I need to go to sleep too. Goodnight!)
 
Alton stood in the trees looking off into the forest for the girl. Still no sign of her, he jumped higher up into the trees and searched around him. He looked down into the lower branches of the trees and saw a part of her white dress through the leaves. " I found you " he whispered to himself. He jumped through the trees circling around Irma so he could attack her from behind
 
(Kill of heather)


Name:Natasha
Age:23
Gender:female
Personality:quiet, misunderstood.
History:she entered the Portal when she was a young girl.
Pet?:a black kitsune named Kiki.female.
Species:nymph
Picture/Description:she has long light brown hair and pretty green eyes.she weres a tight dress made of vines and flowers.
Weapon (optional, only different types of knives):a regular knife.
Username:cluckcluck1215
Did you like the story line (yes/no/suggestions. Optional):GREAT
 
Alton stood in the trees looking off into the forest for the girl. Still no sign of her, he jumped higher up into the trees and searched around him. He looked down into the lower branches of the trees and saw a part of her white dress through the leaves. " I found you " he whispered to himself. He jumped through the trees circling around Irma so he could attack her from behind
Irma thought she heard someone whisper, but couldn't make out what had been said. She looked behind her curiously, to see if Alton had found her. She saw Alton and pouted slightly, "Aw, you found me. I lost." She muttered. But then her eyes that nearly looked dead lit up with curiosity once again.
"So, what happens now that I lost? Do you get a prize?"
 

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