A Chicken Clan RP "ҒІу щїτн Тнε вѓееze" Lock please!!

[ChickieBooBoo]

"Who is in charge right now?" Clawtail shouted "I wish to speak with them"

 

[Delta2 23]

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'I see. When is this attack going to be?'

(That was an even worse rhyme than my dime about the time)

"Soon."

(I was only three years dead, but it told a tale. And now listen, little child to the safety rail.)

Brookchick flew into the cave, breathless. 'Raven!! They're starting the attack NOW!! We have to do something!'

(You rhyme made little sense, for I am confused by the contradicting tense)

 

[duckluv]

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MoonChick edged away from them.

LeonIva, not knowing about the rogues, blinked at them.

Bessy watched.

 

[duckluv]

Quote:
"Soon."

(I was only three years dead, but it told a tale. And now listen, little child to the safety rail.)

Brookchick flew into the cave, breathless. 'Raven!! They're starting the attack NOW!! We have to do something!'

(You rhyme made little sense, for I am confused by the contradicting tense)

"Hurry! We need to leave!" Syron speeded out like a bullet.

(I think that the song is wrong.)

 

[Delta2 23]

Quote:
Brookchick flew into the cave, breathless. 'Raven!! They're starting the attack NOW!! We have to do something!'

(You rhyme made little sense, for I am confused by the contradicting tense)

"Hurry! We need to leave!" Syron speeded out like a bullet.

(I think that the song is wrong.)

Raven and Brook watched nervously as the army left the cave. They hung back.

(But it might be right!)

 

[ChickieBooBoo]

"Does no one wish to speak with me?" He shouted again. He turned and nodded to the warriors behind him who spread out around the camp

 

[Gerbil]

Moon blinked.

(I have about 5 min's)

 

[duckluv]

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"I do not know you, what is your name? I think that either EagleWing or I are in charge while MoonStar is busy." LeonIva replied.

 

[duckluv]

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"Hurry! We need to leave!" Syron speeded out like a bullet.

(I think that the song is wrong.)

Raven and Brook watched nervously as the army left the cave. They hung back.

(But it might be right!)

The dove peered down at them. "Are you going?"

 

[Delta2 23]

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"I do not know you, what is your name? I think that either EagleWing or I are in charge while MoonStar is busy." LeonIva replied.

YellowFly and BennetDig watched on curiously, getting ready to fight.