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(I love how you leave out all the gory details.Coal watched as Rip-tide and West fought. The scene seemed to happen through a misty haze, as if in slow motion.
The mist disappeared.
The bloody fight snapped back into a regular pace.
And Killdeer slammed into Coal's shoulder.
With a snarl of angry suprise, Coal spun around, catching Killdeer withher massive paw and pinning her. Killdeer stared up at Coal's ugly snarl, fear glistening in her eyes for a few heartbeats. The coyotes lips parted, revealing sharp white teeth. "Bring it" she snapped, knowing the crazed wolf dog was going to kill her. "You probably won't remember this by the time the battle's over anyways"
Coal lunged.
Killdeer yelped. A sudden blast of fear scent filled the air for a breif moment before it disappeared abruptly.
Coal stepped away from the young coyotes body and looked around for her next opponent.

Fluff's even better-
"Dart DIED."
Me: The jugular vein burst and blood rained everywhere.

~Rip-tide, hearing an eerie silence from his comrade's opponent, instantaneously knew death had struck. His ears lopped, momentarily mollified, then the red haze descended again and Riptide continued his savage ripping. Fur flew everywhere as the coyote just barely managed to stand during Riptide's onslaught of heedless blows. Riptide had become a monster of vengeance-
And there was no turning back until his opponent breathed its last.
Or tore the breath from him.~
Flame ripped away from a Cayon packer who tackled her.She stalked to the edges, looking to strike any moment.And in the moment, she saw Cinder fighting Antler.Dispite Cinder's lean, Massive size, she was losing the fight quickly."Hang on Cinder I'm coming!"Flame screeched, not even Relizing she called out her Alphas real name.She pushed through the fighting canines, wolves, dogs and coyotes alike, and lept, lunging at Antler,"Leave her alone!"She snarled.
~
"Flame!,"Cinder yelped, sliding backyards to avoid being crushed.
(Hello!!
Okay cool, otherwise I would have had to make totally new characters! I think I'll just RP Thunder for right now, since I couldn't really decide on Fluffpup's personality anyways.
Should I say Thunder was captured by the No-tails and just escaped?)

Yeaaah... wait, didn't we already do the escape?
Oh, what the tail, I forget.

So basically all the packs are fighting right now. River's just about to charge in last to the war, so Thunder'd be with them.

~Dotpup's head snapped around wildly as she realized they were one pup less. "Where'd..." She struggled to recall the tempered she-pup's name, her mind swirling with the dizzying scents of spilled blood. "-your sister go?" She kept her voice low, not wanting even to alert the kind coyote belle of anything that may have gone amiss. She'll probably kill ME if something happened to that pup.~(Rip)
Brindlepup stood up and snuck over to the front of the den, and peered out through the small opening. She gasped at the number of dogs that were fighting, ripping, clawing,
Bleeding....
Dead....
She saw Tooth's body. And Killdeer's. And SNAKE's. She saw a huge curly-haired dog mauling West, and instinct told her that West wasnt going to walk away from that fight.
"Duskypup" she whispered. "I need to go out there. They're destroying us"
Duskypup looked Brindlepup in the eye. "I could try to stop you, but.... No. You can't go out there." she growled, Moving to block her sister's path. "You go out there, you're dead. Simple as that. And.... You're no good to me dead" she yipped, unintentionally lightening the mood with her mild sarcasm.
"But look! Look at all those coyotes out there. They're getting slaughtered! They need all the help they can get!"
Duskypup turned her head and spared the gruesome scene a quick glance. "All the dead dogs (dead DOGS who are COYOTES.) out there are coyotes (right?
) (One's a wolf.
). A coyote PUP would be like killing.... A cat, to a wolf!" she pleaded.
Brindlepup snorted. "One nasty cat" she scoffed. "Look, i wont take on a dog i know i cant handle, alright? On my word, i promise you i wont be stupid."
Duskypup sighed. "If you die, I'll kill you" she growled, thrusting her muzzle into her sister's neck. "I love you sis"
Brindlepup felt a lump catch in her throat. "I know." she replied, licking her sister's ear. She glanced back at Mink before slipping out of the den intothe battle.
Duskypup sat down by Dotpup, forcing herself to be a calm figure for the younger pup to look up to, despite the awful fear that sat at the back of her mind.
~Calamitypup narrowed her eyes at Duskypup, knowing perfectly well where Brindlepup had gone. "That was a really stupid thing for her to do," she muttered, pinning her ears behind her skull. She cast her eyes in Mink's direction and lowered her eyebrows. "If something happens to Brindlepup, your mother will kill mine."~
~Ash raised her howl with her sister's, hoping to rally the uncertain pack into one final momemt of complete unity.(Great!)
Birch howled to the pack,"Come on!We must fight!"She howled.
For it will be their last... for many of our pack. Her tail flagged in a show of confidence, Ash kicked up her heels and bolted toward the height of the cacophony.~
(XD I've said that to my one friend multiple times whenever she makes me go on some lethal stunt or whatever. "Katie, if we die, I'm going to kill you."("If you die, I'll kill you." XDXDXDI said that to my sister yesterday in the pool, she was standing on me, "If you crack my spine, I'll kill you.")

(You said, "Oh." I reminded you two weeks later, "Oh. Why? I'll get to it eventually." XDXDXD )I think I forgot to ever change da name
I don't remember me being a defiant little potato![]()
(Oooooooh, nice. >:} )Killdeer is dead. >=}
@Flufferes where were we with Bear and Kestrel...
@Feather Hearts shall we figure out where River left River (XDXDXD) and pick it up from there, or start afresh?
(War. About a bunch of stolen pups from different packs and a dead Alpha.(So, uh, what exactly is going on in the RP at the moment?)
