Atomic Powers [Part 2]

[Mantha8225]

((Ready?







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[Shleya Remmos]

(GWAHHH the pictureis too blurry!)

 

[MollyBrownROX13]

(Well, the first and second paragraph use history in the beginning a little too much, but otherwise, that's a pretty good paragraph.)

 

[Shleya Remmos]

(How about this? I ride my bike over to your house and proof read it there XD)

 

[MollyBrownROX13]

Masonsaw the girl who had been fighting earlier, Julie.She seemed like she was in a lot of pain becau she wasn't moving much. he walked over and analyzed the damage, finding she had pinched nerve, He also figured out where to apply pressure to help it. He hoped he wasn't doing it incorrectly. (He isn't... so she should get better.)

Julie's vision slowly can back and the high pitched noise in her ears subsided. She looked up at mason with thankful eyes, unable to speak because she started to cough. The pain in her neck lessoned, but the sharp pain in her head still hurt. Her lungs seemed to have been squeezed so that she couldn't breath. There was smoke in the room slightly because of the friction of the ship hitting the ground so hard/fast. She coughed into her hand. .

 

[Shleya Remmos]

(But i seriously will go to your house and proof read your essay if you really want me to.)

Mason was a little concerned with her coughing. Is she catching a cold or something? He wondered because he could remember her coughing earlier.

 

[MollyBrownROX13]

She took her hand off her mouth and reached into her pocket. She quickly grabbed out her inhaler and pressed the top button when it was in her mouth. Her lungs reopened and she could breathe better, though she still was coughing slightly. She put the inhaler back in her pocket.

 

[Shleya Remmos]

Mason saw the inhaler and raised his eyebrow slightly but didn't say anything, because he didn't want to sound rude. He decided not to tell anyone else. "All better?" He asked.

 

[MollyBrownROX13]

She nodded slightly. "Th-thanks." She said between coughs. She took a few gulps of air again and was able to stop coughing. She finally let go of the metal wall, the wall crunch up.

 

[Mantha8225]

((Sorry, had to go eat dinner. Ummmm, ashley, I probably should finish some stuff first. How about this? I show it to you at the bus stop tomorrow, if you really want to see it.))