ATTENTION ALL WRITERS! C'MON!!!

Here's a blip I wrote about Finn and Eve, my OTP. It's from his perspective.
What do you guys think? It's a forbidden love, so they try to hide/deny it, but it's painfully obvious to those around them.

His expression softened whenever his eyes settled on her, his gaze following even the smallest movement. It appeared, to those watching, that he became lost in thought during these moments, but to him, it was as if time stopped; he had to physically tear himself back to the present and remind himself to breathe. Everything about her was radiant, from the way her eyes danced when she laughed to the beautiful way her mind worked, and he couldn’t look away. He tried desperately to avert his gaze, to not be pulled in by her smile, but it was no use. He was in awe of her, and his eyes gave him away.

(P.S. I know it's sappy but I don't care lol)
 
Here's a blip I wrote about Finn and Eve, my OTP. It's from his perspective.
What do you guys think? It's a forbidden love, so they try to hide/deny it, but it's painfully obvious to those around them.

His expression softened whenever his eyes settled on her, his gaze following even the smallest movement. It appeared, to those watching, that he became lost in thought during these moments, but to him, it was as if time stopped; he had to physically tear himself back to the present and remind himself to breathe. Everything about her was radiant, from the way her eyes danced when she laughed to the beautiful way her mind worked, and he couldn’t look away. He tried desperately to avert his gaze, to not be pulled in by her smile, but it was no use. He was in awe of her, and his eyes gave him away.

(P.S. I know it's sappy but I don't care lol)
Aw, this is cute!
 
Here's a blip I wrote about Finn and Eve, my OTP. It's from his perspective.
What do you guys think? It's a forbidden love, so they try to hide/deny it, but it's painfully obvious to those around them.

His expression softened whenever his eyes settled on her, his gaze following even the smallest movement. It appeared, to those watching, that he became lost in thought during these moments, but to him, it was as if time stopped; he had to physically tear himself back to the present and remind himself to breathe. Everything about her was radiant, from the way her eyes danced when she laughed to the beautiful way her mind worked, and he couldn’t look away. He tried desperately to avert his gaze, to not be pulled in by her smile, but it was no use. He was in awe of her, and his eyes gave him away.

(P.S. I know it's sappy but I don't care lol)
Well written! I find it awfully hard to write in love characters lol. The best I have done is had ships in RP’s but half the time they don’t go anywhere
 
Aw, this is cute!

Well written! I find it awfully hard to write in love characters lol. The best I have done is had ships in RP’s but half the time they don’t go anywhere

Thanks! I know, I'm almost scared to write them because they're so perfect in my head, and I'm worried I won't be able to do them justice on paper. Also, the fact that I'm

all alone (and always have been)

doesn't help 'cause I don't have any experience to write from lol
I just figure I can clean up any screwups in my future drafts
 
Thanks! I know, I'm almost scared to write them because they're so perfect in my head, and I'm worried I won't be able to do them justice on paper. Also, the fact that I'm

all alone (and always have been)

doesn't help 'cause I don't have any experience to write from lol
I just figure I can clean up any screwups in my future drafts
Oof, mood.
 
Thanks! I know, I'm almost scared to write them because they're so perfect in my head, and I'm worried I won't be able to do them justice on paper. Also, the fact that I'm

all alone (and always have been)

doesn't help 'cause I don't have any experience to write from lol
I just figure I can clean up any screwups in my future drafts
Ditto, no experience to write from
 

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