BYC’s Got Talent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[The Moonshiner]

Just for you Moony I'll say it

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Where it says "said a short, silver haired she-wolf with silver eyes" using silver twice so close together, in my opinion, makes the description sound a bit repetitive and less interesting when compared to something like "said a short, silver haired she-wolf with her shimmering, deep set gray eyes fixed on the dancing glow of the fire"

Did Tes tell you this or you came up with it yourself?
I don't usually critique people's work so I don't do suggestions but I get what you're saying and it makes a lot of sense. Good job.

 

[Hannah Jean]

Hi moony how are you? i saw you hit a deer... I'm glad it wasnt serious!

 

[Logar]

Did Tes tell you this or you came up with it yourself?
I don't usually critique people's work so I don't do suggestions but I get what you're saying and it makes a lot of sense. Good job.

I came up with it myself. And thanks!

 

[Barbours]

Hi moony how are you? i saw you hit a deer... I'm glad it wasnt serious!

HE HIT A DEER!!!

 

[Hannah Jean]

HE HIT A DEER!!!

yeah I saw it on the when will muddy something reach 30k messages thread

 

[Barbours]

yeah I saw it on the when will muddy something reach 30k messages thread

Wow!

 

[The Moonshiner]

Hi moony how are you? i saw you hit a deer... I'm glad it wasnt serious!

Hi Holly it's been one of those days and it's not over yet but I'm good.
Yes I hit a deer on my way to work this morning. It came across from the ditch and other lane. Someone was way too close behind me to slam on the brakes but no one coming the other direction so I swerved into that lane and should of missed it but it stopped in the middle and I clipped it.
Cosmetic damage only (I hope)

 

[The Moonshiner]

@Holly Hobbie
@Barbours
How are you all?

 

[Hannah Jean]

Hi Holly it's been one of those days and it's not over yet but I'm good.
Yes I hit a deer on my way to work this morning. It came across from the ditch and other lane. Someone was way too close behind me to slam on the brakes but no one coming the other direction so I swerved into that lane and should of missed it but it stopped in the middle and I clipped it.
Cosmetic damage only (I hope)

thats good!
I hate it when people do that I'm glad you were able to avoid a head on collision with it. I pray thats all it is

 

[Hannah Jean]

@Holly Hobbie
@Barbours
How are you all?

I'm pretty ok! thanks for asking!